Pinkie Pie snaps out of her insane self from making cupcakes and tries to get away from what she had done.
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HOLY WALL OF TEXT!
Interesting Concept, horribly executed. I'm tempted to take over, rewrite it, and show you how it's done.
wat
I....erm.....wut?
Already liking it. Good job.
149756
LET'S DESTROY IT WITH THE HOLY HAND GRENADE!
three shall be the number of the counting, and the number of the counting shall be three.
five is right out.
You guys don't get it. I do, however. It's a letter that Twilight wrote to the Princess!
No, but seriously. It's a story about how Pinkie Pie regretted what she had done, and her FRIEND sacrificed herself to save her.
You don't know what this is and yet it is right in front of you.
And it shouldn't be rewritten, because it's written fine.
To the author:
You did a good job on this. This is the first story in the dark category that I like. Good job.
150154 thanks I haven't been getting much appreciation for the Epilogue.
i was supposed to end the story at chapter 4 but I was thinking how about add how Twilight would look back onto the situation after she had already died. I could of probally worked it more into the story. Eh well I'll know better for next time.
Sadness I luv dashie and I cry and screamed readeding the original cupcakes
and everyone dieing but pinkie isn't the best way to let her have payback it was still good though 
This looks like a job for Mystery Rainbow Theater 3000 (Thank god I'm writing it up as we speak!)
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wow, why do so many people hate this. I
it and it was very touching. and gave me nightmares. 
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So... did I like this story?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNfx1kGV420
I like it, but it isn't the best. It was somewhat hard to read because you didn't use a new line for speaking parts, but the story was good. Also, good plottwist whereTwilight had to sacrafie herself for Pinkie Pie. Keep it up
make paragraphs... if that's okay for you.
150126 One, two, five- no, two- three?
This story is awesome!Keep it up!My only complaint is some spelling errors and how you didn't paragraph it...Which makes it kinda hard to read...So far,it's awesome!
