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Well... That was... Unexpected...
I saw several different scenarios of times where somepony could have been killed...
...but i never thought the actual final blow would be from Fluttershy.
If i want hooked before, i certainly am now.
In my opinion the long chapters are the best ones to read. Loving the story so far, keep up the good work!
actually, i like them being long. it means that alot of important (or just plain cool) stuff is gonna happen.
Ho. Ly. Shit. Fluttershy went apeshit on that poor bastard.
As for long chapters, I usually don't mind them that much, but if you are able to split some into shorter chapters, that'd be cool.
I wonder how much more the ponies will eccept from tia before they start wondering exactly where they stand with her, considering that she already basically executed Spike
This chapter has pleased me.
Here's your reward:
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2958685 2958385 I hate to say it, but there's some level of satisfaction to be gained by doing horrible things to best pony >:D
2958392 Thanks for answering :D And thanks again
2958412 Sorry, but I can't resist it...
*GASP*
"That's what she said..."
... I'm sorry :S Thanks for the feedback!
2958776 We shall see. Although I think it's safe to say that Rarity has issues with Celestia as it is.
2958795 This chapter took an entire month to write. That gif has just made it all worth it :D
Seriously though, I need to learn this guy's moves
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I definitely understand that kind of satisfaction. I don't know why it feels the way it does, but I still understand it. In fact, when i get my story up, I'll be doing the same kind of thing.
And i also think that long chapters are the best kind of chapters.
2958821 http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd274/AdmiralPeach/Loki_laugh.gif
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I request MOAR.
Remind me not to piss off Fluttershy.
2958951 And MOAR you shall recieve
2959056 Don't piss off Fluttershy.
I know that we are supposed to side with Twilight against Celestia, but I feel that the story has had the opposite effect. Yes, what Celestia did to Spike was terrible, but she did it to save thousands of lives. However, Twilight is willing to destroy thousands of lives, including those of her friends, in order to get revenge on the Princess. Who is the bigger monster here?
Maybe this is what you were going for, I don't know. I'm going to keep on reading because I seriously want to know what happens next. I'm just saying that I've lost sympathy for Twilight's cause and I don't see how Rarity could continue to doubt the Princess after what has just happened.
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Also, look what happened to DaemoN. He was a legend while it lasted, man.
2959076 That's exactly what I'm aiming for :D I don't want to have the common tropes of, "Here are the definitive lines defining good and evil." and "This character deserves to win, this character deserves to die." Ideally, I want people to be rooting for one side of the other by the end of it :D
And let's just say that over the coming chapters more things will be revealed that will sway those opinions in a big, big way in both directions.
In the end, the readers' opinions will depend on their morals, just as important choices often do. Or at least, that's what I'm aiming for.
I hope this has explained things a little :S
2959091 If that is really legit, then... fucking hell.
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Y'know, that actually makes me feel a whole lot better. Thanks for responding.
It's official, I'm note very fond of Celestia... Also I love Evil Twilight stories...
DAAAYYYYYYUM DOG
I will say this If the Elements of harmony weren't broken before they definitely are now.
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Sad Face. :C
By the By, how long will the next chapter take? I expect the reactions from the ballroom when they see what Fluttershy did, that's for sure.
2960174 I already wrote that part when I published this chapter :D I've carried it over to the start of the next chapter instead, since it wouldn't really have fit that well on the end of this one.
I'm trying to think of a spoiler-free way to describe their reactions...
Nah, I can't, but the generic site smileys should work as placeholders:
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...And they say his grin widened two sizes that day.
Well, that chapter was just one steadily increasing mass of awesome. Maybe I'm biased, as my mood always improves a bit when there's violence in the air, but still. xD
The only problem with it is that it ends. I didn't want it to end.
(Reading this has got me thinking about the eventual battle scenes in my story, and what level of violence I intend to hit with them. The real question is, "am I willing to dip into the Mature rating?")
The long chapters are not a pain to read! Short chapters end way too fast for me, and this chapter only lasted about 25 minutes. I wouldn't mind even longer ones. Anyways, great chapter! That bit with Flutters was heart wrenching to read, in a good way.
You cannot blame Discord, Celestia. You have never had the ability to truly lay blame on him. You had him imprisoned under false pretenses. You knowingly condemned Spike to death. You lied to Twilight and earned her hatred, causing her to release Discord. And you caused the altercation that led to Fluttershy taking a life. Even gods are not above reproach, Celestia. You. Will. Pay.
I personally like long chapters, they just don't give me a feeling of a cliff hanger...they satisfy me...
Oh dude, I was seriously waiting for this, Pinkamena finally free! Iliterally shouted "Finally!" and it surprised my room mate
Great chapter, totally worth the wait
2962407 :D I can imagine that. Roll on questionable morals and overt sadism!
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Yessssssss....
Fluttershy is best pony, and I hate seeing her so upset.
However...
That's right, random guard. You messed with the wrong. fucking. pony.
I love it when Fluttershy goes badass like that.
Needless to say, this chapter was amazing.
Oh, and I love reading the long chapters. I agree that 20k is too long, but 14k is no problem.
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Thank you for a new chapter, I wasn't disappointed.
Now waiting for more, trying to read the other chapters again.
And for the question: The chapters aren't too long or anything. This length is perfect for my taste.
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...
"That's what she said..."
(Next time I do one of these, punch me in the face please).
Thanks for the feedback anyways :D
2966763 Thanks :D And yes, best pony is full of feels right now, I assure you >:D
So hooked on this story, don't burn yourself out to fast by thinking up all them scenarios and lines ^_^
3003959 The heavens themselves collaborate with me in an attempt to add dramatic effect, it seems
As for burning myself out, I'll try my best not to. I extremely enjoy writing this, but my pace has slowed a little as I delve into the deeper aspects of the plot (not that kind of plot), so updates might be a little slower on the whole for a while.
Thanks for the feedback btw, <(^-^)>
Moar Pinkamena please
3013215 As always, moar shall be given.
I'll definitely be reading this beauty when its finished~ Looks marvelous =w=
3039942 Thanks :3
Okay, screw it. Trying to do a review, but warning, I can't really go back to edit my comment very easily because my phone is displaying what I type vertically one letter per line for some reason. This story so far has been one hell of a ride. Given that I already wasn't a fan of Celestia, I am really enjoying hating her in this. And, while I shouldn't, I'm finding myself rooting for team disco-light despite their being just as wrong. Flutters had to have too much at some point, and congratulations on making her so badass in her moment of... weakness? Not quite the right word, but close enough. I'd have joined your recruitment campaign had I not already been a member of badasstwilight.
I've stayed up entirely too long reading this, so I can't be as comprehensive as I like, but individual chapter reviews will commence on the next chapter. Thanks for the great read, now I'm on to the next chapter.
Goddamnit! I don't know who to root for! The Tyrannical Order or the Righteous Chaos?
FYI in my opinion best chapter length is ~15000 words
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Thanks :D That question's quite old now, but it's good to see that people are still willing to provide useful feedback
I've read many stories that deal with the "What is Celestia hiding from Twilight?" and civil conflicts that would arise from said question. This, by far, is the best of that selection. Very well executed, very well written. This is good. I like this.