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Oh my... I think Twilight needs Rarity's fainting couch for what is about to go down.
Good chapter overall, and the plot has been (sort of) revealed! So Celestia/Luna would have killed Spike anyway if he lived and the only reason calamity was in ponyville was because Celestia didn't have a shield over it or purposefully left no shield around ponyville. Good points for Twilight to get angry at but they can be easily argued against as an accident and the only choice, respectively. I think one more secret is in order, sonething about Celestia wanting calamity to come or she wanted spike to diefor some reason, something like that. Twilight can still freak out but she would be put down or improsoned instantly by Celestia if she tried to attack her in any way (Celestia basically killed spike, so she would have no qualms to either restrain or kill (maybe not kill, but at least injure) twilight if she had to). Gotta have an ancient blood ritual/alicorn transformation/artifact of power come into play. Also remember that Twilight can now argue that she can use forbidden magic since Celestia used it in the first place, and the student follows the teacher. Good work so far and THIS STORY IS AWESOME!! Sorry, had to get that out.
2171686 Once again you impress me :D There are a few things that are even deeper though (Which I'll probably reveal in the next chapter). Can't say too much without ruining it, but the next chapter will be where the REAL questions come into play.
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Okay! My concerns have been put to rest. As long as sonething deeper comes into play to ruin everything (In a good, story fullfilling way), and you do not try and use a weak evil as a cause for greater evil, everything looks good (and an evil good too). Can't wait to read the next chapter and see what you come up with. DESTROY THE WORLD WITH YOUR WRITING!!! Just some encouragement.
keep it coming man! loving every bit of the story!
Unfortunately I have to revise for a french test in two weeks so chapter production is likely to be at a crawl until that point. Just giving you guys a heads up.
I'll cut Twilight some slack but damn is she not thinking clearly.
Heavens forbid Celestia try and protect the capitol of the country that has a population quite probably hundreds of times as large as Ponyville.
As for Spike, if he hadn't been turned into a full sized dragon, this fic would have been over and a [Grimdark] tag applied. Let's apply a little logic. Don't turn Spike into a full sized dragon, and the eldrich abomination kills him and everyone else. Turn him into a dragon and fight said abomination and, if he successfully stalls for time and isn't killed, the abomination is defeated and he has a 14% of living. Either way he's dead, but the latter means everyone else isn't. Got that, Twilight? Of course not.
When there's a threat of planetary extinction at the hands of an eldrich abomination, quite literally the ends justify the means.
That's how one can manage to accurately sum up the whole situation in just two words :D
Celestia is acting just like Dumbledore in Harry Potter... She needs to learn that playing chess and sacrificing dragons as if they are pawns is not right.
2677073 I would assume that you hate Dimir?
Oh, Shit is right.
2594136 however if Celestia hadn't overreacted and stoned Discord could Discord have stopped Calamity from coming? likely yes.
Indeed.
Oh shit indeed, Discord.
Also, I really like Discord in this story. He's badass, and not only is he the 'hero' basically, but Celestia is now the 'villain'. I love it when the villain is Celestia, because I personally think that bitch knows something, or is a manipulator of mass proportions. I half expect the last villain in the MLP series to be Celestia. Oh what a that would be.
That is a massive understatement.