Good story line so far. A bit slow in the beginning but that is to be expected when setting up the story. Just keep up the tempo and the dark\grim theme for twilight. This is a story worth following. One last thing, in the other chapter, luna yells to celestia that "Twilight has awoken chaos magic!", but that is a bit hard to read. Only problem I have so far. Good job and keep the chapters coming please!

2075251 Thanks for the feedback, it's great to hear that you're enjoying the story! As for that line, I may go back and change it slightly after I finish the next chapter, thanks for pointing that out :). As for the grimdark, don't worry, there'll be plenty I assure you, but I have to do a lot of character building first, otherwise it will just be completely out of place, I promise when it gets here it'll be good . Thanks again for the feedback, have a good one!

Chapter VII is almost complete, but I will be delayed a little this week, our science ISA's are all this week to I gotta prepare

This... damn.

I'm confused. Calamity was Discord's living weapon. Discord was happy at the prospect of Calamity ravaging the land. Calamity ravaged some of the land. Twilight used chaos magic and became corrupted. A lot of the chaos needed for Discord to break free was produced.
Then he's sad.

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The Princess was speaking as if she was solely to blame for all the hardships they had endured, as if she was the only one guilty of doing any wrong that day.

Woooo, feels like foreshadowing of a millennia.