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I freaking LOVE THIS!
Say... if they really wanted to hurt Celestia, they could turn Luna into Nightmare Moon again, and without the elements Sunbutt would have no choice but to kill her... But that would be punishment for Luna too. And I'm kind of hoping Luna see's reason sometime soon and quits helping Sunbutt, so it would be ashame to kill her off.
Anyway, another great chapter.
Really? you really had to put in that Cliffhanger... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Still love the story though.
ANOTHERCHAPTEROHMYFAUSTIJUSTREADITANDITWASAWESOME!
How dare you cutting off at the letter!
outstanding can't wait for the next chapter.
Dear princess Celestia;
Today i learned that some ponies will do just about anything to serve their own sense of ego, including lieing to their subjects, attempting to unjustly imprison innocents, and oh yes, sending said subjects to hunt down anypony who disagrees with them even when they are just trying to leave, even if it gets their subjects killed. Today Princess Celestia, i learned about Tyrants and Monsters, instead of friendship... and i learned it all from you...
no intention to spam tunes here, but this is so fitting.
Turmoil. turbulence, treachery and a few games of chaotic chess. What's not to love!
Glad Discord is still his old punny self, the others have been in a sour mood for too long, they need some laughs.
Cannot wait to see the further development of his plan, it's bound to be entertaining.
On a side note though, i am waiting to see how you will portrait Blueblood in this story. Will he be his usual flankhole persona, or will you give some heart warming bonding experience with Rarity as they train together
Either way, loved the new chapter.
It's up!
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Thanks so much
And don't worry, I don't plan on killing off Luna...
Oh, wait, let me amend that:
I don't currently plan on killing off Luna
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Now that I've got that off my chest, I'm sorry, but I couldn't resist (and I didn't want to make another 2-parter)
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Thank you both very much
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Very nice! :D That gave me chills
I'll be doing something quite similar at the beginning of the next chapter (as you've probably already guessed), and this has given me some nice inspiration (but don't worry, I'm not going to copy it), thanks
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Dude, 2:32
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Thank you
As for Blueblood, well... I have something quite interesting planned for him.
On top of that, I'm planning on adding a decent amount depth* to his character as time goes on.
* Please note that 'decent depth' and 'being a decent individual' are two entirely different things
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please copy whatever you want! Just keep writing awesome chapters!
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Thanks I'll do my best :)
Poor Discord, of all his problems pissed off Applejack may soon be the worst...
Oh Shining, you clever bastard... But plans to keep someone away from something usually don't end well.
Blueblood... This is gonna be good
So now I have to wait another month for the letter?
Haha, guess I'm a little behind...great progress, it certainly is starting to get really interesting...wonder what's behind that door in Fluttershy's mind though...how is Blueblood not a pansy in the upcoming chapters? Are any Timberwolves gonna be in the next chapter? Or possibly other ponies like Pinkie? That would be awesome
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Most likely, yes
That being said, my story plan for the upcoming chapters is significantly shorter than it was for the last few, and shorter chapters means quicker updates, so we'll just have to wait and see, I guess...
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3541207 hehe, nice
Hope you update soon.
I really wanna know what's on that letter
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Working on it
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Thanks :D And although the chapters seem to become increasingly bleak and serious as they go, fear not! More fourth wall breaking hilarity - and other shenanigans - will return with force!
I think that discord is going to go to the bat ponies. I first thought the changelings, but the badlands is at the bottom of the map, not where they're going.
Technically Fluttershy isn't a murderer. Shining and the Guards made the first move. everything after that is self defense
I'm afraid of what Celestia's decision to keep the 3 out of this will bring. That combat training is completely pointless, it certainly didn't do the royal guards any good. The decision to go in and take them by force was a very big mistake and I would actually expect Celestia to also see that. They should try not to provoke them but try to help them. They should try to get them to truly realize what they are doing before their bond is broken.
They are the only ones that could still get through to Twilight. Against Discord force is of no use, they somehow have to get Twilight to come to her senses and her friends are the only ones that can do that. I just hope Celestia will realize this before it's too late and Twilight is beyond saving.
I want to see the rest of this, hopefully in the next chapter.
My gut is saying changelings.
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If a cop tried to arrest a terrorist for treason, and he killed him, I really don’t think anyone would say he did that in self defense
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I always kind of wondered if they blasted Luna with the Elements again if she’d turn back into Nightmare Moon
I don't like Applejack. Not in this story. She's too much of a loose cannon. She attacked Rainbow Dash and only came to her senses after she saw the aftereffect of her childish tantrum, when it never should have come to that at all. I mean, she destroyed EXPENSIVE perfumes and a probably really expensive dresser. She's lucky that Sunbutt didn't want AJ to pay for the damages, otherwise AJ would probably be working off that debt until the day she died and still would have some debt left to be repaid. Another thing I don't like is Twilight's obnoxious attitude toward Discord-senpai. But honestly that probably fits her character in general. Sorry I haven't really commented until now, but every time I reach the end of the chapters, I always end up distracted and with the need to read the next one. I love this story now and I wish it hadn't taken me so long to get to reading it. Lots of love and respect to you, Author!