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Id say well funny story about this I'm a human I'm going back to the world I came from joking unless I was still human though that would be really awkward to tell the foalks back home
but if I was Star Spectrum id stay beside her even though my charecter is her fan made son so that doesn't play out well
144712
... Oh sweet Celestia, no. A Mary Sue. Kill it with fire.
Oh and Ps Humans don't share the same D.N.A as Ponies so we cant have kids because her egg wouldn't react to human sperm cause of the genetic structure so ummmm TROLL SCIENCE:1 YOU:0
Oh god. This is unreadable. Fix you errors immediately! Then I can read it. Also, cliche as fuck.
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Just read the chapter.....And what the buck?!
How can someone, from another universe and who's a different species, just show up in Ponyville and whined up nailing Twilight Sparkle? Ugh, oh well. *tracks* Down the rabbit hole I go...
i can see this as being a scenario in some kind of mlp ero-game....a fairly rushed one at that. it took me like 20 minutes to read because the entire time, i was thinking of different options on what to say to Twilight to get to the point at the end of the chapter. if this was a dating sim game, then i would play the hell out of it. this will be tracked.....
This needs more descriptions of scenes, expressions, and actions. Inaddition, the ponies would be a bit freaked out by a human showing up out of the blue and the human would be freaked by it.
This fic needs to be improved a couple of notches in quality or turned down a notch to become something like "Spiderses".
I actually kinda enjoyed this simply because i laughed at the sheer stupidity of it
144920 NO U>>144725 Get your facts straight, ponies have uterusses!
144956 Spiderses is the best written piece of fanfic ever. It was so well written that my intelligence just burned away as I read it. Thus I was unable to finish it becuase not only did my intelligence burn but my retinas. It was just that good.
144999
D'aww
Not a bad concept, if done right, but I can't get into the story. It reads like stereo instructions, meaning very flat and devoid of personality. The spelling is okay but the syntax, the format and the character feel very off like here is a character, this their name, end scene. There's no character development and things feel very rushed. This type of fic has been done before and it's been done better in roughly the same amount of words. I'm not saying give up, everyone has the right to post their fic, but this could use some refinement. I'd say add another 600 words of characterization.
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Lol! Didn't read lol! Also character development is totally there
GIEF MOAR!!!111
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