I'm more of a comic book writer but i wanted to try something different.
Ever wonder what the world be like if we shared this world with ponies? Well a lot of fanfics are like this but we’re going to view it from the eye of Drake Stevens (The main character) a collage slacker who spends his days playing video games and watching horror flicks, but his world is turned upside down by a certain group of ponies
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*beginning
gotta watch out for those chapter misspellings.
am puting it in the read later, i want to read more ch if it turn out to be a bad story or a good story.
1913428 I'm really sleepy now dude i had to upload this thing at 2:30am dude, but thanks for pointing that out
why so many dislikes?
So... Like every other fanfic like this?
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*Sigh* Shit like this is NOT taken lightly! If a large incursion of an alien species ripped a hole through our atmosphere and came piling out in the thousands publicly, I would expect a large-scale military reaction. Bad shit can happen from simple misunderstandings, and such a peace-loving race such as these ponies may be unaware to this defensive action taken against them and their reaction towards it could just as well garner a face full of led. Even if they soon revealed themselves to be sentient, they would be INTERROGATED by whatever nation's territory they popped into. Under our warped views of 'humanity' we would probably study them, experiment on them, mistreat them. The concept and practice of magic would completely eradicate our view on science, and spark even more controversy if even a single pony decided to use this magic on us or against us (not to mention some governments willingness to abuse this new-found power). The ponies would be effectively segregated from the rest of the world or something similar to District 9 because frankly, I wouldn't think we'd openly accept a foreign race we know NOTHING about, especially when we know these creatures are powerful. To exclude District 9 reasoning though, these creatures arrived starving, weak, and powerless. They were no less of a logical threat than the idiots plaguing Earth, and they were subsequently sent to live in hobo towns and were actively being experimented upon medically (Usually through lethal means). Any idea that these ponies would be accepted into society would only be possible over a large span of time, if humanity doesn't already kill them/start a war/scare them off.
BUT MAYBE I'M LOOKING TOO DEEP INTO A SELF-INSERT'S WILD FANTASY.
What is he, a satanist?
This is college... Right? Have the people of Earth identified Equestrian males from females?
Now, I don't know what kind of colleges you're thinking of, but most colleges I know segregate boys and girls dorms. It wouldn't make much sense to put a women in a residence hall full of males would it? I guess no one would of anticipated them wanting to fuck a small horse.EDIT: I looked more into this, and there is some colleges practicing Co-ed Dorms, so I'll just go on a hunch and say that's what you're attempting here.
1914002
This is a self insert with a Romance tag. What did you expect?
As interesting as the plot of the story could be, the way you've done it seems kinda.. Wonky.
And another thing; paragraph spacing, paragraph spacing, paragraph spacing.
1914002 Thanks for the honest criticism!!
I have but question?WHY IS THERE ONLY ONE PAGE!!!!!!