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BlackBolt


Just your average Brony.

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Scootaloo has a friend with her...herself/Self Conscious...but what she doesn't know is that her friend has a secret within. Can Scootaloo stop the madness on her own? Read to find out! (WIP).
Don't be surprised if its not good..this is my first ever fanfic.


BlackBolt has been in PonyVille for a long time now. Memories come back to haunt him and he is left to face some kind of evil that is unknown to anypony in their world. Will he va able to face this evil alone? Or will his friend RedSky help him, like she helped him on his quest to find the falling star.

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All of that text just for a really small image with some text that we can't read? Blasphemy.

It may look long and boring...but that's what prologues are...but I added some stuff to spice it up a bit...and don't worry...your gore will come soon!:derpytongue2:

2117666 Goddammit people stop getting links directly from google.

Also, what is this a crossover of, exactly? Just curious.

Don't post a story with gore in a folder that's clearly named Comedy, or to any folder the story doesn't apply to please.

Crossover is from other fanfics I have read... Nox Silvia, RainbowFactory(comming soon) and Fire in Her Eyes so far.

And I don't have it listed as commidy... It never was..

Btw I have most of the main storylines of each chapter written down...so it will be quicker than most fanfics to type out and add a new chapter!:pinkiehappy:

Self-insert? And what exactly makes this a crossover?

I told you the different fanfics I'll be combining into the story

Sry I haven't been working a lot..I am currently looking for my papers I lost..and deciding what I should do for BlackBolt(Me) and RedSky..

I'll get back to work ASAP!:rainbowdetermined2:

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/)_- Yes, there are text walls...so what. It's my first story if course there will be.

Very nice, Nathaniel! I love the story so far! Can't wait till the next chapter!:derpyderp1:

When I saw the title for this story I thought, "THE POWER WITHINNNNNN!"

Happy Independence Day Every Pony!!
Chapter 5 is WIP and will be here soon

If you have any suggestions give me ideas!

You were kind of inspired to write something dark after reading Cloppie's "Nox Silva?" I too was inspired by that story. Only, I'm doing a youtube reading for it.

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I know what you mean. Nox Silvia was a great story that I really enjoined. I plan on including it in on later stories of myself/BlackBolt.

This story had some problems, like multiple ponies conversing in the same paragraph. The ending wasn't very satisfying to me. If I have the story correct, a pony died, then woke up in the hospital. It was an interesting enough concept to start with, but now that I have gotten to the end, it lost me. It was ok but it felt rushed and had problems. The ending threw me, personally. not much else to say. I wish you luck on the rest of your writing.

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It is my very first fanfic so I'm not surprised it had faults. Ill keep those all in mind for my next fanfics. Pacing, no conversion, and better ending.

P.S. if you didn't see it said:

"He had hidden his secret once again. His secret, just like his many others. We're left behind soon to be re discovered, in a much later time."

after he had returned home and told he was lucky to be alive.

2872617 It might have been a combination of pacing and how the ending was done that made it less than great. more details into it might have helped, and it kinda ended abruptly. As far as I know, If the characters are speaking, it is one voice per paragraph with some description if necessary, like how the character feels or looks, or whatever might fit in that character at the time. Don't know much though. There are things to work on, but not a bad concept.

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Looked over it again. I looked over the ending especially. I see now what you mean by ended abruptly and too quickly. I know that I could have made Chapter 6 much longer, it only has 805 words compared to the rest of the chapters.(Excluding Epilogue which again, I could have made longer.) And the conversion of talking I will work on that next fanfic I do.

Thanks for the tips for later fanfics I write!

2874157 Your welcome. I think I will give the next fic a try. good luck on it.:twilightsmile:

Prologue remade! Hopefully it is better! :twilightsheepish:

Fixing Text walls and adding some stuff....and removing a few things to.:derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

More Revisions! I'm getting a little exhausted here...:applejackconfused:

Chepter 3 redone! again..NO MORE TEXT WALLS!! YAY!!!:rainbowwild:

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