Ice Heart finds himself in Ponyville. He doesn't seem to recall anything before he wakes up.
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use the enter key more when you past the text in, put a space between each paragraph. easier to follow that way. still, want to read more though.
1824739 Thank you. Is spacing all that is needed? I almost think I'm missing the mark on twilight's personality.
Amnesia: a loss of memory. Usually from trauma, either physical or phsycological.
A. You don't say!
B. Obviously, he was asleep, ie. not concious
nah, its okay. i guess you could work on wording, but there is a proofreader group for that. everyone does that.
still, like the story, continue.
Other then the one typo of:
which is the only typo i found to be honest
it's pretty good! do continue. 
1829032 Thanks. Fixed it.
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Fucking hell.
Are you dead or something?
Cause if you are, I will resurrect you and then kill you for dying.
The first damn chapter was posted in December and it's currently February.
I, personally, think that this is good so far, but I prefer to have several chapters before my final verdict on whether or not I think that this is a good story. Having only one chapter makes that hard. Because only a single chapter usually isn't enough to properly judge the entire story for me, damnit, fuckers.
Imma follow just so I know when this damn thing has a new fucking chapter.
2170031 New chapter
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It's a nice story so far.
Any chances for updates in foreseeable future ?
2330279 Pony creator, (The new version): http://www.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-v3-397808116
My story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/132574/game-of-ponies
At least one of these things will not disappoint you.
This is how you know that you're in a sleep. Yet it doesn't work for me. I remember a dream I had which was about a school shooting at my school. There was a f****** flying platform there. How did I not know that it was a dream. I even climbed up on that flying platform so it was a major part of the dream, yet I failed to realize that it was a dream.
Dude, the law of unicorn magic that I have read about on the my little pony wiki states that a unicorns aura is the same color as their eye color.
3265965 mucking around with it created this monstrosity vs0I80C/Q5OKkXxAovzqjun18370041Us4UbkJh3wKtuD/t//16 (ponycode)
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I can see why you would see problems with it that way. Then again, I myself have had dreams that I thought were real, although they disposed of physics. Also, about the eye color not matching the aura of his horn was because at the time, I thought that two things, first being that a red glowing horn for ice powers wouldn't work. Second, I thought that it was supposed to match their cutie mark color.
One final thing, if I have to include law of every magical detail that was cannon, then he would have had his memory back through some sort of retrieval spell through Luna or Celestia, as at least they would have known who he is, seeing how old they are. But keep in mind that changing one detail could mess up the story. Who knows? He might have some other magical force (That is secret for now) that changes how his horn glows.
Please let me have my fun.
3439953 Go on ahead. The reason my OC has a different kind of magic that doesn't show his magic aura is (not by much) because I didn't want him to have a green aura.
3441571 Oh, I also saw of a hole within the eye color thing. Shining Armor has blue eyes, yet his aura is pink.
So, just remember that a unicorn rainbow dash would be strange. But that's assuming that it's correct about cutie mark instead of eye color.
3441921 Oh my god you're right. Either all the others were strange coincindence or the one who drew shining armor was drunk or something.
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Actually neither. Cadence's eyes are pink and her horn turns blue. If you read deeper into it, it sound more like it is either their eye or cutie mark color.
3443834 True, or somehow they switched. You know how they are a couples couple.
3443918 Throughout season 1 Twilight's horn glows both pink and purple. In "A Canterlot Wedding", it was pink. It might be their choice. But notice how there's only one color we've seen for black magic?
3444958 In season 1 episode 1 they don't their horn glows white I think and the objects they lift sparkle. So I don't trust season 1. The Canterlot wedding though. Hmmmm, no I don't know. I guess most of the artists draw like that but not all. Or I'm wrong and everything is a big conspiracy to fool me. Or coincidences.
3446286 Well, just mind that they didn't have the same smoothness of animation either. It was more of a test run.
3450759 Mmmmmmmmmm, okay.