You slowly come to your senses, and as you look around, squinting at your surroundings you realize...
You are in Twilight's bed! and no, not the trundle bed, but her REAL bed! You start to sit up quickly, but you are jerked to a stop. You are tied up! She has chained you to her BE-
Oh. wait a second... After a breif moment of observation you realize the restraining pressure was from the sheets. Wait-That's right!
THE Twilight Sparkle... had tucked you into HER bed.
You smile, and look down at a white spot in your peripheral vision, and spot a note left next to your hand. Freeing your hand from the tucked in sheets you read a simple, “Sorry...” with a sad face scrawled next to it.
You smile, remembering the flustered look on Twilight's face when she blasted you. As you look around the room you hear quiet breathing and.... There she is... Curled up and sleeping peacefully next to you.
You can't help but smile and whisper. "She trusts me... At least a little bit..." You gently reach down, and brush a bit of Twilight's mane out of her eyes. “It would be so easy to hurt her...” You shake your head gently, rejecting the idea completely.
"I guess I really do like her mane..."
You just peacefully sit there, gently stroking Twilight's mane for a few minutes.
You smile, and gently whisper to the sleeping Twilight. “I don’t think you are evil Twilight. You... you’re just doing this to save Equestria, and... I don’t think you like doing this anyways.” You chuckle affectionately and add, “Otherwise there would be a lot more lists involved...”
You shake your head slowly. “What’s wrong with me... What am I doing?”
You hear the music building, and closing your eyes, give in and quietly sing to Twilight as she sleeps.
What's the matter with you, ‘Merica?
Have you been too much on your own?
So many things unclear...
So many things... Unknown.
In my life...
There are so many questions and answers
That somehow seem wrong
In my life...
There are times when I sing away the silence the signs of a musical's song!
And it sings...
Of a world that I’ve longed to see
Out of reach-
Just a whisper away...
But now that world do I see!
Does she know that I think, does she know that I feel?
Does she see what I need, will my freedom she steal?
In my life. While you're kind... now I feel all alone...
So hear me now... Free... me here...
(End song at 1:26, or when Valjean starts talking...)
You finish the note, and right as you begin to sing the next note you pause...
You heard something... A low growl.
You look up and syddenly a dark blur bowls you over, somehow melding incredible silence with incredible strength as it grabs both your hands in one of it’s claws, and plugging your mouth with it’s tail.
Wait, tail?!
Your eyes focus, and then the blur is framed by cruel, gleaming fangs, and you realize... it is Spike’s face that's bathed in moonlight. A gurgling hiss escapes his gullet as his eyes flash in anger, “Ttttthought you could steal heeerrrrr did youuu?”
With an audible, *SNAP* Spike’s claws spring into place on his free hand, as he slowly reaches down towards your manhood with a maniacal grin plastered on his snout. He's bigger than you now, and as much as you struggle, you can't get lose.
“I’vvveeee beeen waiting for youu to sleeeep to do thisssss....” Spike hisses at you. “But I gottt tireedddd of waitting....”
His claws float close to your manhood, as Spike triumphantly hisses, “Afffter allll... what ussssse is a gelding.... when they want ssssstallions?”
Your eyes flash wide open, as Spike tenses his muscles to remove your balls.
Suddenly, there’s an EXPLOSION of glass, and a orange and black shape SMASHES into Spike’s head. Spike staggers backwards, stunned, as the blur is suddenly joined by two other blurs. Through the dark you realize that they are ponies, and slightly small ponies at that!
“Wha? What’s going-” *POOTIS*, Twilight’s had started to groggily wake up, but she falls gently back onto her bed. You see the white and black pony shoot a second blowdart into Spike's neck, but Spike simply growls, and lunges at the little Ponies. They scatter, and shoot two more darts into Spike’s body. He goggily shakes his head, and slurs out, “Threeee darts is tooo mucccchh....” Spike takes a few more shaky steps toward the nearest pony, and is rewarded by four more darts to his chest.
*THUD*
“Cutie mark dragon hunters!” “YAAAAAAY!”
Suddenly the white one coughs, and all three miniature ponies (Isn’t that redundant?) compose themselves and trot over to you. “America. We’ve come to free you.” The white one squeaks out. “Will you come with us?”
You look at the soundly asleep Twilight, and hesitate. Then you hear the sound of a hardwood floor being scratched, and you see one of Spike’s claws reflexively gouging large chunks of wood out of the hardwood floor.
*gulp* “Ok. Let’s go.”
You take one longing look at Twilight’s sleeping form, as you follow the three miniature ponies through the moonlit hole they made.
Well spike is now freaking creepy.
spike is now freaking creepy!!!!
DAMN SPIKE WHO THE HELL NEEDS TO SLEEP?! CUZ I SURE AS HELL DON'T!!
this chapter was so pointless and...i don´t even know how to say it without sounding mean...sorry but this one was just absolutely bad (even worse than my English writing skills) You can do better we both know that ^^
Uh.
This story had potential. You've flushed it down the drain into the sewers. Adios.
2954665 Huh. Is there a reason why? I mean, if you look at all the foreshadowing I've written into this story it should have been clear what direction I'm taking this story in.
This isn't turning into a grim-dark, this was just a quick chapter to bridge the two arcs. (I'm not entirely sure what made you give up on this story... It's changing locations, and that's basically it.)
Also, this chapter didn't make this a Twilight love story, as much as it may look that way.
2954655 Um.. Ok? Is there a reason you didn't like the story? (Mostly this was just written to give you guys something, and to kick off the new arc...)
Pootis, huh?
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At first, it seemed a humorous concept. I'll read it through from the beginning one more time, but it just seems... Aimless? And I know you're not going romance or anything, there's no tag, and I'm not assuming you'd change that drastically.
Where the disconnect is, I'll have to reread it to find exactly, if there even is a spot. It just seems like things have kind of meandered, and it wasn't at this point, it's been drifting for awhile.
Maybe the whole 'Hey, go live with the pony that chased you around town in the first place?' I think the drastic tone shift after the pre-trial, or whatever it was again that happened. Maybe that. (Very tired, so thoughts are somewhat disconnected. I'll make sure to give ya a better reason. I'll keep an eye on this, but dunno how longer I'll stick around atm)
2954825 I KNEW someone would get the reference!
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Any reference to TF2 or a TF2 meme will never escape me! For I am The Silver Stout Shako, master of Demopans! Have a Robo hat for the TF2 reference.
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2954858 Hey, if that's the reason why you are leaving? I totally understand. I originally started writing this story for fun, and to just kinda mess with the idea of Twilight kidnapping a human. I originally had some ideas for a big story, but didn't really think I'd have the support/creativity to actually put the ideas on paper.
However, the support on here has been great, and regardless of some of my HORRIBLE writing (yes, I still need to re-edit some chapters.... ) people have liked, and stuck with "Running"!
Honestly, my random ideas had kinda played out for the Twilight setting Arc, so I'm moving the scenery on a bit, and pursuing the main story. I hope you'll enjoy future chapters, if not, that's totally fine! There are TONS of great writers much better than me out there!
Spike what happened to you, you were my favorite character.
So Spike had another greed episode. Then the CMC show up.... I don't see the problem. It's like Pinkie being Pinkie, just go with it.
yay, ace ventura references
now i've gotta go watch the movies
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plot seems unpredictable and completely random, but the story is still a fun read nevertheless. You don't need to plan out the whole story, sometimes random idea(and a bit of insanity ) works better for comedies. Comedies are meant to be fun but not necessary serious.
Note to self... kill spike too, and make it slow.
please don't tell me he's going down the road to Stockholm syndrome...
This guy's got Stockholm Syndrome like nobodies business...
2955544 ARE YOU TELLING ME YOU'VE NEVER SEEN ONE ACE VENTURA MOVIE~!!!!!!!
2956510 oops, there's supposed to be an 'again' in there
Why has Spike gone "I wanna cut your balls off" crazy? Will he act like this to any other stallion that makes a move on Twilight? I sooo wanna see that!
i thought he was dreaming there for a sec... unless he really is and its all in his head. i like the picture, especially the book
So Spike went insane with jealousy, and now America is AWOL with the tiny trio. This should be interesting, though I do question why all three would defy their older siblings in such a manner.
Have a nice day.
EpsilonWinter
... ... ... What happened to Spike's crush on Rarity? ... ... ... I'd be way less forgiving than America about this whole situation... ... I'd probably start axe-murdering. Then subsequently die probably.
A real American would have eaten spike alive if he tried that shit
That is all
I would laugh if America went all Chuck Norris on Spike.
2957307 Hey hey heeeeyyy
2954896 please please PLEASE! Hurry I really want a new chapter.
3035729 Indeed I have! This purposefully is a very... difficult world for, "America" to live in.
I'm looking forward to how he handles them...
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Hahaha it sure is funny how Spike pinned him down and was about to claw his balls off and he's probably not going to be punished for it at all hahaha, just like all the other people being awful and not suffering any repercussions hahaha.
To me, this isn't Comedy. It's Dark. Here, let's do a little thought experiment. Imagine that the human was a female, and all the mares in the story are stallions. The kidnapping with the expressed purpose of rape, the chasing, strapping her down, forcing her to live with the one that's responsible for all of it, Spike pinning her down and trying to carve out her reproductive bits. Suddenly feels kind of creepy, doesn't it?
This story started off kind of funny to me, but then quickly became grating. It especially didn't help when Twilight did her song in the court scene, demonstrating that she knows exactly how awful she's being and DOESN'T ACTUALLY CARE.
My interest in the story was already dying, and this last chapter finished it off. I mean, I can almost get the angle of the rest of the story, but the bit with Spike was a completely different tone. I'm done.
3047352 All good points, and while I'm sad to see you go, I completely understand.
I'll say this, then you can decide for yourself if you want to stay. The prior chapters (the darker ones) were purposeful foreshadowing. They were enabling me to continue writing the story, and press onward to the ending/different scenes.
So if you want to stick with me, and see what else comes of this? That's awesome! But if not, I truly understand. (and honestly there are a TON of much better authors out there. Like Aegis Shield!)
Anyways, I will say this. If you have the story pegged like I think you do... you've got skills!
As a farewell present, I give you this!
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Mmf...I'll put it on Read Later and check back in a while then, I guess. Least I can do is see where you were going with all of this.
Can I have some more please?
also. I feel like this needs a romance tag for some reason.
Can we get a follow up with rose luck (I believe that's her name T_T) the mare from the hospital?
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*Reading comment....*
HE'S IN MY HEAD!!!!
(Yes, I intend to have Roseluck appear in the story again soon...)
Please sir, may we have another chapter?
WOW. This chapter was certainly surprising. *shudders* I will never look at Spike the same way. AND GO CMC!!!!!!!!!!!!