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The Elements, though most of them are content to know peace, have been lifted to a godly status. As their fame grew, as did their power. Their auras gained the ability to affect people, and their professions became something more than a hobby to them as their minds warped from the fame.
They were separated, their power manifesting itself in the more of creatures that could not be killed by metal or magic. They have been split for centuries, their mortality spiralling away. It is 479 years after the Separation of the Elements, and they are needed again.
Those who used to use the Elements have grown accustom to their solitude. When the time comes that they are needed again, the Elements must be controlled by different people. Their time is over. They must be retrieved.
I see a gore tag.
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I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work!
1799134 Gore is coming my friend, it's on its way.
1799542 I think you should say that the story is humanized in your description, because right now it says ponies and is a little bit confusing.
(Joke) Alt. Title: A Gore A Fanfic
1800035 Ah, good eye. Didn't notice that in editing, thank you
1799513Thank you very much!
Why are so few people reading this story? I think it's a fresh and interesting idea.
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Simple. Most people are out shopping for christmass, making christmass treats, spends some time with frineds/family... i think you get it.
Short said, thay are not on fimfiction. that's why
Need more
1871947 More coming! Read my blog while you wait?
oh this would have been so good if it wasn't humanized
1960551 I give reasons for why it's been humanized in my first blog post, but if that's how you feel I won't argue with you
Interesting concept, combines the basic lesson learned by anyone in power with the fact that nothing lasts forever. Disheartened at the corruption of Twilight, but i can't wait to see how they get the element of magic itself away from an Alicorn grade mage. On another note, do you have a proofreader or do you do that yourself?
1960759 I do the proofreading myself, but if you find any errors, or are willing to be a proofreader for me, just put it in the comments. It would come in handy and I wouldn't object
1962132 I'd love to proofread, as this story seems like it could have quite a story to tell, but i personally find it disheartening to post the faults of an author on the front page of their work. I would happily read and fix documents you send to me, but my manners dictate i can't just post that you messed up here and there. If you want to talk more on this, please PM me on here or Skype at vavel13. Its just a personal stance i have on the subject.
I admire your tenacity and frequency of chapter publication.
2038539*Is unable to tell if it's sarcasm* I'm doing editing of former chapters and dealing with exams, which end in a couple days. From there things will proceed as normal.
2041798 S'not sarcasm.
2041800Oh, well in that case I'm sorry
But that's why nothing's come out in a while.