Where Do You Think You're Going?
"Uhh. L-Look, I'm really sorry. But, I didn't mean to steal this in fact you can have it back.. But you could be nicer about it. I never thought candy colored ponies could be so ferocious!,"
Kid Said to the orange pony as he set the apple on the ground. He nodded his Head and stared at her. The pony still looked angry as ever. Her snout was crinkled and her giant green eyes were near slits.
" Now. I'm going to leave. You don't look.. Happy, to say the least. I'm sorry I've angered you by taking a fruit that you have hundreds if not thousands of. Good Day.,"
Kid snarled at the pony. He was ready to walk away, but the cowgirl pony wasn't having that. Every time Kid tried to step around her, she scooted back in front of him. After about 3 minutes of playing this useless game and getting no where, Kid got fed up.
"Please Get out of my way! You're beginning to make me regret saying I was sorry! Now move!,"
Kid Shouted at the pony. She simply refused though
"Last I checked you weren't the boss of me! This is mah farm! I make the rules. Appplejack is not a pony you dare mess with and you did! Why? I don't recall doin' anything to you!,"
Applejack shouted back. She teared up while shouting it at Kid. Kid frowned. While he didn't care for the feelings of those he didn't like, this pony was different. Seeing her cry made him felt kind of bad, because in the pony's perspective, she did have a point.
"Oh... Look. I was jus hungry. I wasn't trying to steal your fruit. Please now. Stop crying immediately "
Kid looked at the pony. She stopped crying. Bu she still looked a bit angry. She sighed and smiled.
"Look. This was just a big misunderstanding. I shouldn't have gotten so mad at you. I'll just forget all this happened, because this clearly was all a big mistake. Ok Sugarcube? L-Let's just start over."
Kid looked at the pony in total confusion. One minute she wants his head torn off and the next she's nice? How strange. Might as well take advantage of the moment before the pony changes her mind.
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Hmm could be interesting, going to read this. I wonder how the universe will be able to handle both Twilights and Kids ocd.
PS:For an example of Twilights ocd at its finest watch lesson zero, and for Kids watch pretty much any episode of soul eater that features him.
1680753 Ha! I know right? Thanks for reading! I'm really going to have a lot of fun writing this. Two of my favorite shows tied together? Yeah. That's how I roll
1680687 Very Observant. They're meant to be short. I prefer stories with shorter chapters. I believe it makes life easier for the reader. It makes it easier to keep track of which chapter you're on, and where you are. Thanks for reading!
1680953 Awesome! I knew there'd be other Soul Eater crossovers. I will be sure to read what you've written so far some time! Thanks for reading
Ok, I can deal with the "beginner" level writing, that's something that improves with time, practise, and feedback.
However you are doing 2 things that you really have no good excuse for.
1: Logic. Some aspects of this story make no logical sense. The biggest one is how do the ponies know Kid is a human, or what humans are like, if they keep saying they've never seen one before?
2: Characterization. With Pinkie you got the overall concept right, but are ignoring a lot of her canon historical characterization.
With AJ I have no idea who that is, but it's not her. She's fluctuates between angry redneck and Fluttershy.
Chapters need to be longer.
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I've got a good hunch about how they know: LYRA
arnt the trees symetrical
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So you're saying that you have to have seen something before to be able to identify it?
So you can't simply have read about them, or seen pictures of them?
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The way they are saying "I've never seen a human before" in the context implies they do not know what he is yet somehow know what species he it. They didn't say "are you a human?" Or "you're a human". If they do know what humans are that is not implied by the dialogue.
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Actually Pinkie said that MET a human; which implies that she knows what they are, but has not met one.
And Applejack said that she has never laid eyes on one; which just means that she has never seen one, not that she doesn't know what they are.
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If that's the case it was presented rather poorly. Oh well.
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I like this carry it on :3
This story is very interesting... I like this crossover; good job!
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Kid what are you doing here?
1680753 Best example of Kid OCD? Episode six, in wich the son of deah is defeated by a bad haircut. Now I cannot wait for this story to be back up again, so I can see Kid meet Twi. The symmetry! THE SYMMETRY!!
1680753 Best example of Kid OCD? Episode six, in wich the son of deah is defeated by a bad haircut. Now I cannot wait for this story to be back up again, so I can see Kid meet Twi. The symmetry! THE SYMMETRY!!
4535602 So Kid, enjoying equestria?
When I saw this fic, my first thought was
"I'm gonna love Kid's encounter with Discord."
And then I saw that the fic is cancelled.