• Published 17th Nov 2012
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Maid of Honor - sniper125



A year has passed since Luna made her return to power. So why is their only one who cares for her?

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Act II

Maid of Honor
By: Sniper125
Act II

"The courts have now been completed for the night! Please make your ways home safely!" A royal guard bellowed from his spot next to Luna's throne as the rows of ponies sitting across from them began to hastily file out of the court room.

The princess stretched her forelegs and stood up to head towards the large door. Soon after she left the courts Sapphire appeared behind her.

"You did very well tonight Princess. You made a lot of ponies happy today."

"Thank you Sapphire, it's nice to see somepony that appreciates me..."

"What do you mean? You did so many good things tonight! I'm sure the school children will appreciate how you approved the building of a new playground for the public school!"

Luna stopped and turned towards Sapphire.

"Yes, and what else have I accomplished tonight? I've settled numerous carriage parking violations, charged half a dozen mares for prostitution, I've even had to deal with a deranged farmer who attempted to sue aliens for drawing crop circles on his land! Do you see what's similar between all of these cases?"

Sapphire could only reply with a shake of her head.

"They're pointless! Equestria is not going to collapse because a pony didn't fully pay for his breakfast at some diner in Lower Canterlot! Can you not see it? Ever since my return to the throne my sister has given me nothing but the bare minimum of duties in ways of relevance to our government!" Luna turned once again and resumed her walk down the hall.

"Well Princess... maybe your sister just doesn't think you should rush back into such a high role. You have been gone for a thousand years..."

"Perhaps you're right... but it has already been over a month since my return! I can't imagine why she would still believe I am incapable of ruling over my subjects."

Sapphire hurried in front of Luna as they reached the door to her chambers.

"I say we save this conversation for another night. Because now we must prepare you for bed!"

Luna nodded and quietly entered her room with her servant close behind. Sapphire waited for Luna to take her seat on the side of her bed. She then began to remove each glass slipper, placing them on a small stand next to the night stand. The next article to be removed was a large necklace colored so black that it seemed as if no light could touch this ornament of night.

Luna shivered slightly as a breeze blew across her body, cooling off the spot of her coat where the necklace had laid the entire night.

"It's a shame that these must be removed my Princess, you do look lovely in them." Sapphire smiled at Luna when she turned her head to look the maid in the eye. Luna quickly brought her gaze forward again to hide the hue of pink forming in her cheeks.

Sapphire giggled lightly to herself and removed the final piece of Luna's attire: the crown. The symbol that showed all her subjects that there were now two rulers in their land once more. Sapphire lifted the headpiece up and stared into the very same material that made up the very necklace she had removed earlier.

But something about the crown was different from the necklace. While the materials used claimed to be identical as the necklace. The crown had an ability unique to itself... When peered into by a select few ponies, it was believed that they could see the Princesses emotions, thoughts, even her memories.

Luna had admitted to her servant that while there we indeed ponies that could read her mind, the only ponies who could were those that she deemed the closest to her. She never understood why the crown acted the way it did, but considering it never brought her harm she had decided to leave it be.

Another effect it had on other ponies besides herself was arguably magical in its own way. Even if somepony could not make use of its telepathic abilities, the very design by itself seemingly pulled the viewer into a trance with its it's intricate design that flowed and swirled around the crown.

Sapphire loved Luna's crown, it was almost a nightly routine for her to peer into its dark expanse until she was brought back to the real world by Luna. Luna remained quiet and smiled as she watched Sapphire. It felt like nothing would be different this night as she brought the crown close. But as her eyes traveled across the ornament's surface... She noticed a small object floating just behind the clouds that swirled within.

Sapphire blinked, believing the object she saw was just her imagination. But even as she turned her attention to another part, the object simply floated to that spot. Sapphire didn't want to believe it, but the object was indeed visible and it was definitely inside the crown. It wasn't the fact that she could see inside but it was what she could see...

A heart...

Not an actual heart but one a filly would draw to show love or happiness. Normally this would have meant a good thing if wasn't for the ice frost that seemed to blanket the entirety of it. Icicles also seemed to be collecting near the bottom.

Sapphire couldn't understand why, but she could not hold back a small tear as she watched the heart be chipped away very slowly by an invisible pick. Tiny pieces gradually fell in front of her down to the dark depths of the shadows, seemingly lost forever...

"Sapphire!"

The mare looked up, not knowing that a few tears were still trickling down her cheek.

"What's wrong Sapphire? You're crying!" Luna brought a hoof up and wiped one of her cheeks.

Sapphire flinched at Luna's soft touch but remained still until she had removed her hoof.

"Princess?"

"Yes, Sapphire?"

"I... saw something within the crown..."

Luna blushed deeply at this new knowledge. She took a deep breath to calm her heart that suddenly skipped a beat.

"W-what did you see?" Luna could only pray it wasn't what she thought.

"I saw something that finally explained to me what is happening to you... I saw something I never want to see happen to you again!"

More tears began to fall as Sapphire lunged towards Luna, all formalities had now been forgotten.

"I never realized how lonely you were..."

Luna's expression turned from surprise to solemn as her friend wrapped her hooves around the princess's waist.

"S-Sapphire?"

"I don't want you to be lonely... not while I'm here to help it..." Sapphire looked into Luna's eyes.

"What're you saying Sapphire?"

"I'm saying... that ever since I began to work here... I have always wanted to be that pony that you could count on to make you happy. But I was foolish and thought that simply caring for you would keep you happy... I never knew how you really felt!"

Sapphire continued to ramble until Luna shushed her with a hoof.

"You have always made me happy Sapphire, seeing you're smiling face every night has done so much for me that I could never explain the joy it brings. But after some time... I realized that I wanted more of these feelings, I wanted to see you al the time instead of just at night and during my work. I wanted you to be at my side no matter what was happening, not as a servant... b-but as something more..." It was Luna's turn to wipe her now moistening eyes.

"But I always remembered that if I did anything to you I would only end up hurting you eventually... Just like every other pony that was close to me..."

Sapphire pulled herself up to eye level with Luna.

"That's a silly thing to say, I wanted nothing more than to be closer with you." They both stared into each others eyes.

"And you would never hurt me enough for me to ever leave you because..." Sapphire paused, her throat felt very tight as she tried to force the words out.

"I-I... love you Princess Luna! Not as a princess but as somepony that I want to spend the rest of my life with! I want to be there with you through any situation; good or bad! I want to help you through all of your struggles and share the happiness when you succeed! Princess, I love you!" Sapphire pulled Luna close, tears were now flowing freely as the mare softly wept for the princess who was still comprehending what was just said.

"I-I... I love you too Sapphire..." Such words had never been uttered by the princess in so long that they felt foreign to her lips. The little maid looked up again with a teary smile.

"D-does that me you'll accept the feelings of somepony like me?"

"Sapphire, there is nopony in the entire world that could compare to you... Of course I'll accept them." Both mares were now smiling through tears when Sapphire began to fidget in her seat on the bed.

Luna moved off the bed and helped Sapphire off before pulling the covers back. Sapphire then used her magic to fluff the pillows gently.

"I suppose we should skip the bed routine for tonight Princess. I hope you sleep well tonight..."

"Well... I was kind of hoping..." Luna was now sitting under the covers and turned a light shade of pink.

"...that you would spend the day here... With me..." Sapphire blushed as well but slowly approached the princess again.

"I-i would love to Princess." Sapphire fumbled with the straps that held her uniform together until the garments eventually fell to the ground. She then slipped under the covers and moved closer to Luna before wrapping her hooves around the princess's waist once more.

The two laid together in each other's embrace as both closed their eyes.

"Sapphire?"

"Yes Princess?"

"I was wondering if you could call me Luna..."

"Of course, Luna..." Sapphire giggled at the blush that was returning to Luna's face and sighed as her lack of energy was becoming more apparent.

But Luna needed one more thing before sleep could come...

"Sapphire?" The mare looked up again just in time to receive a gentle kiss.

"Thank you for everything... I love you..."

The End

Author's Note:

Not the biggest thing I've written but I think it's a good start for a return to writing! I apologize for the long delays, I have nobody to blame except myself and I do hope you will all forgive me and continue to read my stories as I try to finish them all!

Warm regards,
Snipa

P.S. - Something's in this story seemed rather random to me and I apologize to anyone who thinks that as well!

Comments ( 7 )

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I don't approve these words in Tia- or Luna- fics :twilightangry2:

Also what's with "sex" tag? The hottest thing was Luna's moaning during washing scene. And that's very tame by anyone's standard .

1919763 Well this story isn't ACTUALLY done. The main story is complete but I'm adding a clop chapter for some friends.

1919763 Well this story isn't ACTUALLY done. The main story is complete but I'm adding a clop chapter for some friends.

1920572 yes. Besides the "extra chapter" this is it for now. :ajsleepy: I know the story was really short but I intend to write a much longer story that isn't as rushed once I finish all of my other projects.

I apologize again for the shortness.

Myes- this was rather short, the confession felt like it had built up without our knowledge, but even so- it was pretty cute. Though it was hard to get immersed in the emotions of the confession when we didn't get to ride on the build up. It has potential, at the least. Though it would be nice to see more.
Next time, try just drawing it out more, adding more story points and emotional candy. Especially reactions and inner conflict can be more interesting than drama or misunderstandings in romance. Anyway, I'm sure you'll experiment more and try more things, have fun!

The main reason I read this because it wasn't a ship with Celestia, Twilight or a human male or royal guard. Even though it was short it was a good read. Wish there were more like this.

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