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Well, this is a first.
Me scrolling though Fimfiction media.tumblr.com/7be54df669d6a80675f38e9ee20768af/tumblr_inline_n9cbzhrH941sdj1dk.gif
then I see this storycdn.sheknows.com/articles/2014/05/JULES/Cute_baby_GIFs/adorable-baby-gifs-blog-muchmusic-com.gif
then I'm like gifsforum.com/images/gif/lol/grand/jim_carey_lol_gif.gif
Liked for the title, but can't slog through the fic. Not my taste, but I had to comment.
~Dash The Stampede
In the description:
I feel like you should change that. Simply saying "He'd rather hire a woman for sex" feels a bit off. It feels like you're going to make a comparison. I would try saying something like; In fact, he'd rather hire a woman for sex than deal with the stress of commitment. I'm not trying to be picky, it just felt really weird the first time I read it.
To my surprise, I actually liked the story. I feel like it doesn't deserve the like/dislike ratio it has, and you certainly have a lot of potential. Keep it up!