When the Governor of Manehattan, Tempered Steel, disapears from the public eye during the largest riot in the city's history, Twilight and her friends find themselves in the heart of a sinister scheme. Malevolent agents lurk around every corner, clad in shadows, lies and familiar faces, and when Twilight and her friends uncover the largest smuggling network in Equestria, thier lives are changed forever.
Special thanks to SuperChaosKG for proofreading for me. ( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/SuperChaosKG )
The character shown in the cover art is done by me.
I did not create the background. All credit goes to the artist.
(I could not find his Deviant Art page, so here is a link to the original file with his name in it.)
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/139/d/8/cave_background_vector_by_bakabrony-d50c0w0.png
Not sure if want...or just bored
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S'all good, I'm know "Negative" Characters are quite a big cliche in terms of Fanfictions, but I'm going to try and write it them as their own characters.
As well, I hope to keep the mood light, like the show, but the story itself will deal with some darker subjects. (As you can probally guess, the Earth Pony politician is Racist, this will play a bigger part in the later chapters.) Still, I hope you keep an eye on this story, because I will be updating it pretty sporadically.
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I left for a few hours and decided that if Likes > Dislikes, I'd read it, but if Dislike > Likes, I wouldn't...
4 likes, 4 dislikes...
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I...guess I'll read it...if I die, tell my nonexistent kids I don't love them, and my dogs will get my stuff
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Lucky me! I hope you like it.
To anybody reading these comments now: Everything behind this post is relating to the old version of this story. (The Other Elements). Please enjoy my first fanfic (redone, for you wonderful people.
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Al...
Why did you delete all those comments
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They were cluttering the space, I didn't realize that it would leave a marker each time. I just wanted any comments here to be about the story as is, rather than what it was a year ago.
Definitely an improvement
I liked the paragraph near the end that compared the out-of-place Manehattan comments to a Vinyl Scratch song reference thingy :P I thought that was creative 