An Artists Many Talents
The Wonderbolts hovered in glee at the large smoke cloud that sat where Deidara was. Fire and Lightning Streak chuckled at the sight. "It looks like we finally got it done." Lightning said from his brothers side.
"There is no way he made it through that." Rapidfire responded. They had unleashed a dozen lightning strikes all together in the end, so they knew it must be over now.
Rainbow and Fleetfoot exchanged hoof bumps with each other. "Ah yeah! We got him!" Rainbow cheered.
Fleetfoot chuckled at that. "That's what he gets for messing with-
"Rah!"
All of the wonderbolts went silent as Deidara yelled coming through the smoke. He was on top of a large owl, his body and cloak burned and torn up on his right side. "Im-impossible!" Misty Fly shuttered.
"How can he be alive after all of that!?" Soarin gasped.
Deidara glared down from the sky on his clay owl. His blood rushed through his body, turning his face red from anger and frustration. He could not believe that these ponies were able to not only to survive his C2 chakra, but they were able to take it out as well. ‘This is truly becoming ridiculous’ he snapped at himself, ‘I am the great artist of the akatsuki, I will not lose to these low lifes!’ reaching into his pouch, he pulled out a large wad of clay and held it in front of his face.
Staring at the clump in his hoof, he grunted as he reached down and took several bites of it with his regular mouth. As he chewed on it, he couldn’t help but grin to himself. ‘I will show them true power. I shall let them experience c4!’
The group of pegasi stared in confusion as they watched Deidara start chewing on the clay itself. “What in the hay is he doing?” Misty Fly asked.
“I have no idea…” Rapidfire responded, “Whatever it is, I don’t think it is good.”
The akatuski Pegasus clasped his hooves together, then Deidara leaned forward off of his owl and opened his mouth, spewing out an unreal amount of clay out. The wonderbolts gasped in shock as the massive stream of white fell down below and began clumping together to form another massive shape. As it shifted, it soon solidified into a gargantuan version of the akatsuki member as it crashed into the ground, standing well over a hundred feet tall.
Deidara gasped for air after using so much chakra, but he still kept a large grin on his face. 'This was to be my trump card to kill Itachi, but I guess I can use it now to end this fight.'
Rainbow dash felt her heart ramming inside of her chest at the monstrous shape standing before them. This was far bigger than the dragon he had made earlier. The tall Deidara began trotting towards her and the rest of the wonderbolts, it's massive legs crashing through the trees below. "What do we do?" She quickly asked.
Spitfire began fluttering backwards away from the incoming figure. "Get of of here! All of you!" Flipping around, she took off and flew as fast as she possibly could away from. The rest of the Pegasi in the air followed suit and took chase after their captain.
Misty fly pumped her wings as fast as she could, but she still began to fall behind as the group as they sped through the trees. She already was one of the slower ones, but her exhaustion was making it worse. She however wasn't the slowest one of the group at the moment.
Fire streak struggled to keep up as well with his injured brother he helped along. The extra weight he had over his shoulder kept him from keeping a steady flight through the air. His heart beat faster and faster as he noticed the gargantuan figure still trotting after them. "Shoot, this isn't good Lightning!" He yelled out.
Deidara lifted a hoof in front of his face when he was ready. "Heh heh, it's time for them to experience just how far art can go!"
The tall Deidara on the ground stopped walking, suddenly expanding outward like a balloon. After growing more than double in girth, it began breaking apart like it was a pile of dust. Lightning Streak looked back in confusion at the disintegrating object behind them. "Fire, I... I think the clay messed up on him. It didn't blow up."
Fire turned his head as he flew, noticing the lack of explosion as well. "Yeah, guess you’re right."
Unknown to them, Deidara knew exactly what was happening as he sat in the sky above, grinning at the fleeing Pegasi. "Now, taste the power of C4. KATSU!"
Fire and Lightning Streak suddenly felt pain all throughout their bodies. Then, they could not believe their eyes as their hooves began to literally dissolve in front of them, breaking apart into small specs before disappearing completely. The same thing happened further up their leg and began to spread out through their upper bodies. They screamed out in terror as they felt their wings break apart and fall off into small pieces.
Misty Fly flipped around to see the horrible thing happening to them, but then felt the same feeling creeping through herself. "What is this!?" She screamed out as her legs began to seemingly tearing up into small specs, floating away and breaking into nothing. She screamed as loud as she possibly could as her torso starting breaking up, moving further up until it reached her neck and eventually ate away half of her face.
Rainbow Dash turned around as she heard the screams in the distance, nearly dropping the cloud she carried as she shuddered at the sight of her comrades disintegrating behind her. "We have to go help them!"
"No!" Soarin yelled from the front, "we can't do anything for them now!"
"But-
"Rainbow, there's nothing you can do." Fleetfoot said from the side.
Rainbow wanted to fly back and try to get them out of whatever was happening. When she looked back in the distance however, she saw nothing left of her comrades except small traces of their outfits. The fluttering pieces of fabric floated in the air before those breaking up as well, turning into specs of dust and blow into the wind.
Deidara smiled as he flew on his owl after the retreating wonderbolts. "C4 karura, my most powerful chakra that I posses. After releasing my millions of microscopic bombs that enter the body after being inhaled." He chuckled as he shoved more clay into his mouth hooves. "Once detonating, they destroy a target on the cellular level, blowing them up from the inside."
"It's a shame that I was only able to get three of them with this technique. I guess i underestimated their speed again. The others were able to get out of the blast range just in time. Hmm." He pulled out his hooves and began forming his next creation. "No matter, I will just take them out one at a time then."
Spitfire stopped flying as she stared at the approaching owl in the sky. Her mind was flipping back and forth of what she should do; fly back and retreat to Canterlot, or stay and fight to the end against Deidara. Both options pushed back and forth inside of her, trying to overpower the other. When she looked back at the four remaining wonderbolts with her, her anger suddenly grew to the boiling point. "No..."
Rapidfire looked at his sister. "What?"
No!" She screamed out as she blasted through the air right at Deidara, her cloud held right at her chest.
"Spitfire, no!" Rapidfire yelled after her, but his voice was on deaf ears as she charged up.
Deidara chuckled as he saw the enraged Pegasus still wanting to fight him after what had happened. "You have some guts I have to say."
Knowing her chances were low didn't matter anymore, Spitfire would not let her friends die in vain at the hooves of this sick Pegasus. She gripped her cloud tighter, forcing small sparks to shoot out the sides. Knowing the amount of strikes she had done, this cloud only had three bolts left in it before it ran out on her. Throwing it out in front of her, she flipped forward and kicked it, forcing a long stream of lightning to arc outward towards Deidara.
Grinning, Deidara banked his owl to the right to evade it, but as he did, he saw another bolt of lightning shoot out there. Quickly ducking to the left, he now found himself between the two streams of lightning, with nowhere to go. "Damn, she wanted me to evade the first one. She used that as a diversion to send out the second one and pin me between them!" He said to himself as he watched Spitfire position herself directly in front of him. Realizing he could not fly to the sides, he chose to fly straight at her, spitting out another large clay owl at her.
Spitfire took a deep breath as the owl approached her. Knowing it was her last bolt she had, she made sure it would strike good. Tossing the cloud up, she spun around and bucked it as hard as she could, blasting out the final bolt the cloud had. As the bright stream rushed up, Deidara detonated his own projectile at the last moment, stifling the electricity's path.
Spitfire threw the useless cloud to the side as she continued up Into the air. Right then, Deidara came through the cloud of smoke, not prepared with clay as Spitfire brought her left hoof back for a punch. "You are gonna pay for what you did to them!" She launched her hoof forward, slamming into the akatsuki members face so hard it molded around her-
"What the?" She gasped as her hoof was now stuck inside of Deidara's face, which then began shifting in color until it was a pasty white. Then she realized this wasn't Deidara.
Down below, the others stared up in confusion at what had happened. Then, from out of the cloud, the real Deidara flew out, a wide grin across his face. Rainbow Dash and Fleetfoot gasped at seeing this feat. "He can make copies of himself out of his clay?" Fleetfoot mumbled.
Rapidfire shook his head in disbelief. "I didn't know he could. I-
He stopped speaking when he realized what his sister was stuck inside of. "No! Spitfire!" Dropping his cloud, he took off up in the sky towards her.
Deidara's large grin grew bigger as he watched Spitfire struggle to free her hoof. "You fool. You fell for my clay clone." He chuckled as he flew up above, leveling out in front of the moon. "I overheard you mention these only contained the power for ten strikes, so I was keeping track of how much each cloud you used. I knew that was your last strike in there, so you would most likely come in for a close range attack."
Putting her back legs against the mass of clay, Spitfire pushed as hard as she could, but her hoof stayed lodged inside of the thick material. Her heart began beating faster and faster, sweat pouring down her fur as she realized she couldn't get out.
Deidara laughed as he brought his hoof up to his face. "It has been a pleasure fighting one who has actually lasted this long against my abilities, but now it is time for you to die!"
Rapid fire flew as fast as he could, seeing his trapped sister helpless inside of the clay. "SPITFIRE!"
"KATSU!"
The massive explosion lit up the sky, enveloping the wonderbolts captain in a blinding flash. Rapidfire stopped as he watched the large cloud of smoke appear and spread out from the flash, blocking out all sight to the center. Then, his heart jumped as he watched a figure fall through the smoke and towards the ground. "Spitfire!"
Rushing forward, he reached his hooves out and caught the limp form out of the sky. Quickly dropping down, he headed towards one of the clearings below and laid her across the dirt. Once she was down, he pulled back his goggles and headpiece to his suit to clear his face. His blood ran cold when he looked down at her body. "Oh no..."
The entire front half of her left foreleg had been blown off, leaving a burnt stump. Every piece of her flight suit was gone, leaving her exposed and burnt fur in its place. Across her face, deep scorch marks covered the entire left half, the red patches of skin leaking blood. Rapidfire started hyperventilating as he stared down at his sister. "Spitfire, come on get up!"
Spitfire cracked her eyes open, her breath coming in small gasps. She coughed several times as she tried to speak up. "R-Rapid..."
"Shh, don't force yourself. I'll get you out of here."
Rapidfire tried to pick her off the ground, but she screamed out in pain as his hooves pressed against her body. Lettering her go, he sat back, panicking at what to do. "D-don't worry, I'm gonna get you out of here!" His voice trembled as he looked around for anything to use, but stopped when he felt a hoof to his cheek.
Spitfire took several breaths as she gazed up at her younger sibling. "It's over. I'm *huff* not gonna make it."
"No!" Rapidfire screamed as he clenched his eyes, fighting back the tears that formed. "I'm going to get you help! You are going to be-
"It's okay Rapidfire. *huff* it's okay." She said with a smile. She coughed up a small mouthful of blood, running down the side of her face.
Rainbow Dash and the others showed up at the scene, all gasping at the sight of Spitfire on the ground. Fleetfoot prepared to run forward, but a hoof stuck out and stopped her. She looked up to see Soarin holding her back. "What are you doing! I need to get to her and-
"No." Soarin responded as his eyes began watering at the sight of his longtime friend dying in front of him. He knew though the one standing above her should be the one with her.
Rapidfire's eyes now poured tears as he helplessly sat above his sister. "No, you can't die on me Spitfire. I... I can't lose you too."
The dying mare gasped for air as she looked to her despaired brother. "I am sorry, but *huff* I know you will make it through. You have always been strong. You pushed yourself after they left." Spitfire stroked her hoof on his cheek, wiping away the tears from his face. "You can do this, Rapidfire."
Grabbing her hoof with his own, Rapidfire used his free hoof to brush away the strands of mane that hung in her face. He blinked several times to clear his eyes. "I can't lose you too. You are all I have left."
Rainbow Dash couldn't hold back the wave of tears that fell from her eyes at the sight of her good friend dying in front of her. She turned and buried her face into Fleetfoot's neck, sobbing uncontrollably on her companions side.
The sound of crying made Spitfire turn towards the trio of wonderbolts standing off to the side. Her weakening heart felt pain for having to leave such good friends. "I'm sorry *huff* but I won't be your captain anymore." Tears dripped down Spitfires face as her head laid back on the ground. Her fading eyes turned back to her brother "Goodbye Rapidfire. I'll tell mom and dad *huff* hi."
Eyes rolling over, Spitfire went still, her life leaving her body on the ground. Rapidfire dropped his head down, burying his face into her side as he cried. His muffled screams rang through the dark night, echoing in the air as he mourned the loss of the last family he had.
From above, the cries of agony entered the ears of another Pegasus, who instead laughed at the damage he had wrought.
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hyahahahahaha woohooo kick ass deidra!!!
This is why you don't mess with shinobi...especially those guys.
And another four bite the dust. Three of them quite literally dust.
Is it sad that so far all of us are actually wanting ponies to die? I get that the akatsuki are pretty badass, but these are the ponies we all know. Just seems wrong to be voting for the supposed "villains"... too philosophical, not caring anymore. GO DEIDARA!
Yep. That's how you do it. I wanna see more ponies die.
The sad music helped for Spitfire's death. Somepony's not gonna recover well from this...
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...Now my insensitive mind's thinking about DBZ Abridged Frieza; Both the time he killed Vegeta and when he brings up what happens when he tries to spare children when committing genocide.
Good old Deidara.Can't wait for Itachi's battle.
You know you've written a good story when bronies are cheering for the deaths of ponies. Oh man, I can't wait to see what you do next. This was one hell of a chapter! Keep goin and stay golden^^
2294655
Well it's not that we want the ponies to die, I think it's just that we want to Akatsuki to succeed. Won't make for a fun story otherwise.
2295092True enough. Dying ponies just happens to be a by product.
HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! YOU CANNOT DEFEAT THE ULTIMATE ART!!!!
Yes!!! Spitfire is D-E-A-D, DEAD!!!
Humans…such fickle beings.
2294655 People want violence, haha
2294763 you are one of the only people who feels bad for Spitfire. I thought that scene would make people emotional for her
guess not. haha
2295037 thanks. which chapter has been your favorite so far?
2295327 took me time to write the C4 scene. hope it was good
2295537 you like death dont ya?
2296082 what!? of course not. I just really hate spitfire.
see I have a reason.
2296082 You wrote the C4 scene quite well, I also did feel pretty bad for Spitfire, and the others who died as well, I'm just glad C4 worked. Stay golden my friend.
Oh man. Coupled with that song, I nearly cried myself. It was pretty jarring since I had just rewatched Sasuke vs Deidara. I came into this chapter thinking "They better hope he doesn't use C4." And then he did.
I just don't see how Deidara is going to die.
2296123 glad you felt that. I looked around for the right music to pick.
2294648
Deidara should use that song every time he kill someone with that technique
Only 4 wonderbolts left now? They better make a run for it or they're dead. I always wondered why villains liked to sit back and watch the emotional scene when they could just attack at that time. Probably because of satisfaction.
im personally waiting for the pein fight
aww that music at the end gave me a sad...
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but...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! KILL THEM ALL DEIDARA! KILL THEM ALL!!!
2296283 let's see what happens now
Shoot! Deidara's on fire 4 down and only 4 to go.
Can't wait for the epic Pein vs Celestia battle.
Awesome chapter
Pain v. Celly!!!!
Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore it, you should really run a spell check through your chapters. Your story is good, but it would be better if there weren't so many grammatical errors.
ive been meaning to say this but have been putting ut off for whatever reason, but you tend to use the word comrads fairly often.
HAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA, JUST A FEW MORE.
I love how nobody is reacting to Spitfire dying.
I thought it was pretty damn sad, and you picking the perfect music for that scene didn't help.
2297953 is there a lot of mistakes? I know the first two chapters I have never had edited
2298149 do I? I'll try to change it up
2298574 god I know! Only a few people said how they were sad when that happened, every one else is cheering on Deidara haha
2296082 All the chapters where you show just how outmatched the MLP guards are have been my favorite. Hope to see more death soon, keep goin and stay golden^^
2298753
Yeah, some words capitalized when they should be lower case and some words lower case when they should be capitalized. Just take a read through your story and you'll see what I mean.
2298958 You want more death? Well, there will be much more when Sasori joins the game.
2300913 Well not necessarily MORE death, but more needless death. I'm liking that the akastuki is only killing background/OC ponies that, while displaying how powerful they are, don't de rail the story by killing a main pony. Think about it, how would things suddenly turn if twilight, out of nowhere, was killed?
2300927 Yeah, it would be weird if she got killed out of nowhere, but I would understand if Twilight got killed by Tobi actually (of course after an battle between them). That would make the ponies feel hatred towards him and they would defeat him because of that later.
...S-Spitfire....
You wan't explosions....?
*pulls out sonic Screwdriver*
I'LL GIVE YOU EXPLOSIONS MOTHER
UCKER!
*Every Bomb is detonated before he launches it, via the Sonic Screwdriver fucking with the chakra, detonating it prematurely*
NEVER CROSS A TIMELORD!!!!
2301199 GO DEIDARA!! haha
I have two things that I want to see.
1. That you don't kill any of the Element bearers. I can stand for background ponies but not the Mane 6.
2. Itachi vs. Luna. WHEN IS IT????????????
Ha ha ha! What rare spectacle, what fortune to stumble upon Twilightclopple's favourite character's demise. Though it appears this will be the queue for Deidara's defeat. I shall just have to savour the other ponies' death at the hands of other Akatsuki members all the more.
To be honest I was sadder when Kakuzu died than Spitfire haha , but I guess that's one of those moments when you are sadder when a villain dies. Also, can't wait to see the ponies' reactions when Zetsu decides to devour someone in front of them.
Imagine if current Uchiha Madara joined the game?
*with a tranquil fury in my voice* deidera..... i will FEED YOU YOUR OWN BALLS!!!!!!!!!!
Fuck yeah C4 Karura
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And this is why i love Deidara.
Why? DID YOU EVEN READ THIS CHAPTER?!
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...Wha....what just happened....
Then again...this is why I came here..
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2298753 ...Dude...I'm on Chapter 14 ...please tell me the Akatsuki win.
3576549 its weird you say that... Since this comment is on chapter 17
Poor Spitfire. Darn! Deidara's gonna get his flank kicked hard for that huh?