Turning a mare into a stallion. Something Twist didn’t think was possible. But when he sees his lifelong dream come true at a magic duel, it sets off a chain of events he never imagined.
Takes place after the episode Magic Duel.
Happy Trans Day of Visibility!
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How to ruin a normal holiday...
Happy Easter to all!!!
This feels somewhat rushed, in the sense that things happen too quickly and their resolutions don't last very long. Twist's emotions would benefit from having more space on the page to breathe. But I do like how Twist is written, and that he is evidently still a child, with all of the restrictions that come with it. The friendship with Truffles is cute too. :)
Hum, it's nice to see a TG of a filly to colt, I would say the story and climax felt a bit rushed and sort of made Twilight, even if unintentionally look like the bad guy, but it's overall very interesting, it would just have needed a bit more polish to to have a more natural flow. I think the trans Trixie idea was interesting along with the shock part she had of the fake Twilight TG spell along with helping the protagonist in their need. I would have liked to have had more of an explanation of what that alchemical brew did exactly to the body, if it was a full TG or just a cosmetic one, how long it took to take effect and finish the transition and what made Twilight's fake spell so incredible for ponies as a concept if there is a service brew available that could do the same if slower and more or less open knowledge? Seeing that the protagonist already wished that they were a colt, then I am assuming that the fake spell spur them on to actually go threw with wanting to transition. Keep up with the writing dude, you did a good job.
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Easter moves around; it wasn't on March 31 last year. Trans Day of Visibility does not move around, and has been on March 31 every year for 15 years. So no one is ruining anything except people like you who failed to understand the lessons of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic.
I have good news for you, though: next year Easter falls on Hitler's birthday, so you'll have two reasons to celebrate, won't you?
While this story is very rushed , it's nice to see this kind of story come out today.
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Next Easter is on 4/20? Bruh, I'm gonna get so fucking high...
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There's a quote attributed to Samuel Johnson (the guy with a very memetic face ) who told an aspiring writer, "your manuscript is both good and original. But the part that is good is not original, and the part that is original is not good". This being said, trans Trixie is neither original nor good.
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Oh boy i talked about this earlier
Ugh