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This is totally something I was expecting from you.
First chapter is a good comedy idea, with the only weird thing being a lack of burning (just because the dragonfire's magic doesn't mean it doesn't burn, it only doesn't burn things it teleports, you could just say Spike thankfully missed anything important). It could easily be E-rated as a fic by itself.
Then the second chapter goes fetishy while not making sense (it's as if Twilight has a hearing problem), and is just not fun. It's exactly the badness I expected from the tags, with a lot of gross detail that just isn't necessary, and if anything is a bit more in the scat side.
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Fair enough. That second chapter was more of a play on an Adventure Time scene. It was also written before the chef one.