1000 years of regret

In Equestria, life is supposed to be beautiful...
But things are not always easy, in fight with her sister, Luna becomes Nightmare Moon.
Celestia is left alone 1000 years, using every second for regrets of her decision.
Cadence on her side, fails saving the Crystal Empire and disappears with it.

These three Princesses will discover through these events the true meanings of their lives, they'll fight for their destiny and will go through the biggest adventures of their lives.

Chapters (3)

Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration · 4th Oct 2012 · 1,126 words
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Chapter 1: Memories · 12th Nov 2012 · 1,156 words
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Chapter 2: Cadence's destiny · 16th Jan 2013 · 1,140 words
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Firepegasus230

Firepegasus230 #1 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration ·

Well, this is my first fanfic ever! Hooray!
Now, i'm not sure if it's good, just, all i ask is if you criticise something, could give constructive criticism, it will help me for the future, anyway, enjoy and have a good read

Kiro0613

Kiro0613 #2 · Oct 5th, 2012 · · · Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration ·

I can't read this right now, but I will put it on my RIL list!!! (Also, I got the first comment in spirit.)

Mossy Mare

Mossy Mare #3 · Oct 5th, 2012 · · · Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration ·

Fav'd for the cover pic. Will read later.

Ehrlichkeit

Ehrlichkeit #4 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · · Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration ·

I might read once you fix the grammar in the description, ex:

Celestia has to choosed between her subjects and her sister and finally,

Should be choose

Firepegasus230

Firepegasus230 #5 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · · Prologue: The Summer Sun Celebration ·

@AzureKaRyu
I just noticed now my mistake, fix it right now

Lord Discord

Lord Discord #6 · Nov 12th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

Awfully short, there should've been much more to this chapter. Maybe the whole thing didn't upload?

Firepegasus230

Firepegasus230 #7 · Nov 12th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

1605266
Yeah, i didn't quite get the whole uploading thing but i think it uploaded while i was writing it, but now there's the full chapter

TheMyth

TheMyth #8 · Nov 12th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

Luna looks too happy right now...

Firepegasus230

Firepegasus230 #9 · Nov 12th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

Sooo, here's the first chapter
just a little info, i know Cadence is Celestia's niece, but it didn't fit exactly in the context, so i put her as Celestia and Luna's cousin, hope it doesn't bother you guys

Lord Discord

Lord Discord #10 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

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Firepegasus230

Firepegasus230 #11 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Memories ·

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you think?

Lord Discord

Lord Discord #12 · Jan 17th, 2013 · · · Chapter 2: Cadence's destiny ·

Outisde the window, they could see the mountains showing the beginning of the Frozen North.
"I think I know where she's going."
Luna was about to walk away when Celestia turned towards her.
"It's time, Luna."
"What do you mean?"
"It's time for Cadence to discover who she is on that journey, it's her destiny to go over there and accomplish her destiny."
"But it's too dangerous! She's just a filly!"
"So are you Luna, but it doesn't stop you from bringing day and night with me."
"We should go help her."
"Only if she needs it."
Luna walked to the broken window, rising herself in the sky, before flying towards the ground, the moon going down with her. As the sky started to change of colors, Celestia rose up, the Sun starting to rise behind her, she went down as well, landing next to her sister.
"She'll be okay, I promise." She said peacefully to the blue alicorn.
"I hope you are right my sister." answered the princess, before turning around and walking back in, without any other words.

And that's the mistake Celestia made, one that would set up what's to come.....
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