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MerchantofMisrata


Currently suffering from terminal brainrot.

Comments ( 15 )

GASP! A griffon pony story? and they aren't humanized or anthro or some other third option?!

WIN. SO MUCH WIN. we need more stories like that!

WTF this is so good!!!!!!!!

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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And here I was thinking griffon x pony was cliché.

we need more stories like that!

Happy to oblige!

I came for the smut yet found nothing but romance.

And it's beautiful.

I have over a thousand hours in EAW and let me tell you. If the more, ehh "carnal" aspects were removed or simply hinted at, this could easily be an event chain in the game for Hellquill.

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Damn, that's some high praise!

As much as I'd love to write for the mod, methinks it would take more time, experience, and connections than I have. Besides, someone has to write the smut! :raritywink:

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i assure you its freaking RARE. especially in the form you wrote it. SO many writers on this sight seem to think Porn, Humanization, and athropomorphizing the ponies makes their stories "unique" but its sooo over done now that having a story where the characters are normal ponies and griffons? without futa, crossover, Anon, or some other crazy additive? Yeah RARE.

and a wonderful sight to see.

...Tasteful griffon and pony romance set in EaW in a backdrop of genocide?
...Without a massive, bloated wordcount or memes?
...Well, sir, have a like and favorite.

I love this more than any story I've read on the site in the past year. I came expecting simple porn, but what I got was porn bundled with a touching story, and I don't know whether the tragedy of it demands it be left on that note or demands more. I want more... But I also understand it might not be the best thing for the story.

Just as he doesn't know her name, maybe the point is that we never know the fates of the characters, as much as it saddens me.

Regardless, bravo.

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Gotta admit, the last thing I expected from this fic was approval from one of the top EaW authors. It is a most welcome surprise.

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Thanks for the review! Always a pleasure to have left such a strong impression.

The contrast between the intimacy of sex and the purposeful ignorance of the rest of their lives makes for a really tragic combination. You really feel for the pair and how painful the dissonance is for them. For as much as people might joke about the first EaW porn fic, I think readers would be pleasantly surprised.

I liked this story. It feels so intimate. It reminds me of why I prefer Starry's path. Sadly, this is how it is in this story. Hopefully, if he had to kill her, he made it quick.

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This one appreciates the comment.

"Had to" is such a vague term, don't you think?

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IT is indeed. I dread to turn the vague into... well.

God, that hit deep. The existential horror one feels living under such a regime...

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