Sugar Sprinkles is the new pony in town, and Fluttershy doesn't seem to like her. Will this end in a total tragedy or will Sugar Sprinkles win Fluttershy's lover? *UPDATE* Comment below if my story could be better and ill improve it, also I will make special request chapters.
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Sorry if this sucks, or the chapters are too short, if you hate this tell me to stop.
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Don't stop just because others doesn't like this.
Well, I can surely say that it's a little rushed. But not THAT rushed. It's not bad but it could use some work. All in all, I'm interessted in seeing where this is going
But... Lovers Glory Hole?
Isn't a glory hole a place where guys put there you-know-whats in it hoping to get a little bit of action???
I agree with Snapple Jack. The title suggests it's a clop fic, not romance.
May want to change it to avoid confusion.
ok ill change the title, but it might take a few hours... k?
I think it would be nice if you continued this. But keep in mind to slow it down a lot, and it should be fine!
im not sure if i could work on it that much, but ill try to on the next chapter, oh and tell me if the chapters should be longer or shorter, cuz that probably why its rushed.
im not sure if i could work on it that much, but ill try to on the next chapter, oh and tell me if the chapters should be longer or shorter, cuz that probably why its rushed.
101601 I did change the name, I hope its better...
Im gonna try to find names for the -- instead of copying names from other stories. k?
101829 ... I don't see how I was runining it. I just said that a glory hole is something that you don't wanna put in your title
102747 I do like the new title. Thank you
There might be a new series after this book with a new pony... TELL ME HOW MUCH YOU BRONIES LIKED IT AFTER ITS DONE!
Workin on it... nows
just so u kno, Sugar Sprinkles, or Sugar, her cutie mark is just like Vynal Scratch, or DJ PON-3's cutie mark, just so u know, if you haven't noticed. just saying
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om YES I DID IT!
I NEVER KNEW OF THIS UNTIL NOW... thx for not helping..
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IMMA GO WRITE CLOP FICS NOWS!
go here to see sexy rarity.
ok imma load a new pic up in place of the old one, because i forgot sugar sprinkles (Me0-0) had wings. i will update the chapters soon too.
i'm new here but i gotta say that was really good
Wow I didn't see that coming. Now I want to see how she continues on after this. Keep it going.