After a long career of study, Twilight could finally stand on her own, but the gears of fate didn't stop turning. a few weeks later,（the end of s9e26）, a fleet of ships from the East arrived in Equestria, accompanied by a long-planned conspiracy in front of Twilight. Will she be able to go through the trials and tribulations of traveling to the mysterious land of Seresia, experiencing a whole new culture, and making new friends while defeating an unprecedented evil force?
I wrote originally in Chinese, so if you are willing to help with English translation~ please contact me on Discord: dreamingheart
Translated by: Dark straw, Blockclear, wd357dui, Luther,Furklr
Illustration Artist:RRDartist
Chapters (70)
Curious, do you write in Chinese because you are from China? I am not an English speaker so I understand the translation problems to a certain extent.
It seems like an interesting story, I'll check it out.
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yush,i write whole chinese version, and love to share this story to the world!
Wow, I have read this chapter, the story is moving forward calmly. I like it.
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thank you~ the chapter two are on the way sooon!
I reached the end of the chapter! this curious, foreigners who bring an exotic fair for the ponies. What can go wrong...
So the fact that they tried to get Luna to marry a nobleman and then steal her immortality sounds like a good plan. The bad thing is that she was very young... ha ha
Good detail with the additional drawings of the characters. By the way... do you know any good translator from Spanish to Chinese?
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sadly i don't know anyone who know Spanish well, you wanna translate some Spainish story to chinese ?
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I know two sis have problems as younger,They just needed a reason to ignite a long-simmering conflict. that's why i made this,hope people don't mind it haha.
Loving this so far
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thank you every much~. i hope you all have best Reading Experience！！I'll do my best to keep the story moving in a way that doesn't make people feel uncomfortable while reading it.
Translator here~ I am responsible for translating Chapter 2 and beyond. I am a native Chinese speaker, but studying in the US now. Both the author and I read every single comment on here, so please, we would really appreciate any feedback. Love? Hate? Meh? Just wanna say hi? All is fine! Leave your thoughts here and maybe check out this cool story!
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oh buck, thanks for telling me that! our translater has busy for his school stuff, every chapter tag as"Early translate" was using AI.
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I know what it's about, basically all my fanfics have been AI translated.
Also post today? I thought it would be the 26th... curious.
About the story...the crystal empire. More intrigues?
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oh yeah~much more intrigues,will put they on the way.
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And those trade links? How unpleasant...
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The story progresses well, although the translation feels early.
Sentimental moments with Crysalis? Uhhh, is there anything coming out of that?
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her children become the rainbow candy xd
Hi, new post?
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hello~im reupload and replace the some previous early translate story.I hope the reader can have better experience.
What's Seresia anyway? Can you give the details on the land that is Chinese based.
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There are just too many things involved here, and I can’t explain them all clearly to you in a short amount of time, this will involve spoilers!! But don’t worry, Mane6 will arrive in the Eastern Continent soon, I will gradually show everyone this mysterious land through articles.
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Okay true that Equestria had a lot of land but the writers didn't say anything about the lands beyond the pony land. Far from it. Like scratching the surface.
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Trust me~ i will do my best to make you like Seresia in no time~ this land not just have pony, but with other creatures and living together.And an element more mysterious and powerful than magic will also appear.
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Okay then.
Really seems nice reading this story and can't wait to see Seresia. I'm a fan of Chinese culture and philosophy, particularly Song Dynasty era.
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thanks~ its chinese new years so i will need stay home with other. i will back to write every soon!!
How wonderful the story is!❤️❤️
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thanks!!
hello, I see that the fanfic continues, but I have a curiosity... have you ever traveled by boat before? in a storm for example?
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I have never taken a long boat trip, let alone experienced a storm on a boat. I live inland, but I have taken short boat rides in other places.
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yes... it's just a detail on my part, but in the descriptions (when the storm appears) there is a lack of impact on the atmosphere where the characters are.
If you mention it, but it doesn't feel involving, as to perceive that the characters are really in danger by a storm of a possible magical origin (dizziness, wind, thunder ... things like that).
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got it, you made a good point, i will re write it as soon as possible
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reworte is done~ how it looks right now?
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Hello, now it's more pleasant to read, I like it. But, you also read what you write, do you think this change favors your story?
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why not?? i like the new part too~ like you said, its more reasonable.
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True, I was saying that, because sometimes, when we are given corrections, these can become contrary to the purpose of the writing. For example, giving an excessive description of the environment right in a scene of decisive combat between two characters, detracts greatly from the purpose of the scene itself. It has happened to me, that the intentionality of a narrative is lost by the corrections that are made.
Well, beyond that. Are you very interested in having feedbacks of your writings? Me too. How about if we exchange writings to revise. If you are interested, send me a message by messenger or Discord.
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I'm not sure if I can help with English improvement, but okay, what's your discord?
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khampostel
我从ft来了
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好！
Who here at babscon corkboard
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i wish i can be there D: