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Next Stop

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A FIM/G3 crossover. Moondancer's life is falling apart and as she nears her breaking point, she starts dreaming about a simpler world where she feels accepted. Inspired by the episode "A Stop at Willoughby" from The Twilight Zone and my own experiences with depression.

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Fujimi200SX

Fujimi200SX #1 · Nov 11th, 2023 · 1 · ·

I truly feel for Moondancer here. I was never bullied like her, nor did I ever run away like she did, but I know the feelings she experienced. They truly suck and shouldn't be something one should have to experience.

This is very well-written for a first fic. So well-written, in fact, that I didn't even realize how long it was until after I finished reading. Nicely done on both that and hitting me with the feels.

beyondthegrave

beyondthegrave #2 · Nov 13th, 2023 · · ·

This was really good! Nice working in the G3 characters as a fantasy dreamworld/metaphor for pony heaven.

Fire Flareon

Fire Flareon #3 · Nov 13th, 2023 · · ·

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Thanks, it took some time to write. By the way the reference to Derpy and Minty sounding the same is because Tabitha St. Germain voiced both of them. There's actually several VAs who worked on both shows, as Andrea Libman voiced Zipzee and Cathy Weseluck voiced G3 Rarity (and G4 Spike, who is in love with G4 Rarity).

beyondthegrave

beyondthegrave #4 · Nov 13th, 2023 · · ·

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Oh that’s super cool. I didn’t know that! Hey, would you consider reading my first story? Idk how I did & it would be nice to know what someone thinks.

Comment posted by beyondthegrave deleted Nov 13th, 2023

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