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This story is a sequel to The Sweetest Smell
"Hold on…
Something wasn't right.
Cé Tusa
Cé Tusa
Cé Tusa
Every other manuscript contained the same title.
Cé Tusa"
What is the meaning of Cé Tusa and what does it mean for Twilight?
A special thanks to my friend Ellenora, who helped me come up with this concept and several of the lines. Also, a thank you to my friend Rewan Demontay who helped greatly by pitching in with edits.
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That should be Lusty Argonian Maid. And you spelled Applejack wrong at one point as well. Still a good story otherwise.
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😆Thank you for the comment and the compliment,
I have gone back and fixed Applejack's name, your right it should be just one word.
On the other hoof the titling of the Hopeful Argonian Maid was more of an artistic choice, as I didn't feel like writing about lust, I figured those who knew would know and it would all buff out in the end.
"I am writing this and I’m still fed up. When Eve comes he will return."
... Ominous.
This one ends very unfinished, that is on purpose. It’s quite underwhelming, creepy repetitions of phrase, mentions of a sinister "he", Twilight seemingly getting possessed, all for... nothing, it just ends.
This also gets an OKAY.