MIke is just your average everyday freashmen college student who just started college. He can also see a magical group of technicolor ponies from a TV show he use to watch. Crazy you say? Nope, just everyday life for him. Join him as he goes through college life and trying to find out what he wants to major in. See him go through a new place with new people and suffer the hardships that college has to follow. Will he crack under the pressure or will the ponies he sees drive him towards insanity. Join Mike as he goes through this slice of life with ponies.
Chapters (2)
You need some work on grammar, namely punctuation and spelling. I swear, if I had seen "awe" instead of "aww", I would have gone on a shooting spree. However, I really enjoy the idea so far, of a normal guy who is crazy. I hope to see more of these in the future!
1377689 Why thank you for your imput, Word can only check on some grammar and not all spelling. Thank you for your imput.
Get an editor. I saw a story with the EXACT same concept as this. However that story never updated.
I hope that won't happen here. I'll like and fav this.
Despite the grammar. This story is rather interesting and seems to be a new take on the whole fandom. I like it and shall track it
I changed the balance for the better! yay! overall I really like this idea.
Dude this is awsome!
Never saw a story like this before,so far I'm loving it
1377984 Don't worry, I will try to update this, since apparently a lot of people like it. Also...I wish Microsoft was a better editor since I can't catch my own mistakes
1378078 Thank you, I try to make most of my stories original and hopefully no body has done this.
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1379035 Whoo! Thank you for your imput and I hope I can get out the next chapter soon!
I love it! I'm getting some major Reanimated vibes! 7/7 Asses.
1400303 I love that show! I just realized that I might be actually basing off of it subconsciously...nope I didn't put the brain of lauren Faust in his head. Or did I?
nah, I didn't
1400369 I liked the movie, but "Out of Jimmy's Head" I just found the world too silly. The concept only works if the cartoons are very silly, but the world is still believable. The show had every thing be silly.
1400615 Well with what I am doing it is similar but at a more reasonable method then just insert boy who sees crazy ponies everywhere he goes
1400844 Again like the movie instead of the "Let's go against everything the original was." T.V. show. Your doing it right!
1402412 thank you...I hope i'm doing it right.
1402425b I'm sure you'll do fine! You have all my faith!
1402459 thank you for the support!
1402470 No problem! Hell if you want an editor I'll be happy to help!
1402485 thank you!
I will try to write this when possible and Microsoft word sucks at being an editor.
1402495 Take your time bro!
1445445 Yes...I have am working on another story with someone else...That Kiki story is important to me since I want to do something for her...and I haven't updated the other story in a month...my scheduling is messed up
1445607 yes...I try to do that...my mind doesn't work that way though...it is really sporadic. I come up with a new idea and write it...then another pops in...and then I got bundled with it all...sorry, that is my one draw back at writing...I can't focus my mind and sporadicly come up with new ideas.
1445936 thanks...I can see how hard it is to write.