After beating the Dazzlings in the battle of the bands, Sunset Shimmer became sick of being the good girl and wanted to regain the power she had lost at the Fall Formal…one sacrifice couldn’t hurt, right?
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"There is nothing we can do."
Not gonna lie: didn't like this much. It feels entirely at odds with Sunset's lyrics in the song she would've sung just before this, it makes zero sense that the others wouldn't try to stop her, and frankly just doesn't feel right.
For what it is, it's a decent attempt, but it has too many logical issues for me. Also, there are a number of typos, including misspelling Applejack's name, below with two l's, and so on.
I want the name of the author of the cover or where you got it from, it's absolutely great! Above all, I say that she seems too surprised, I would even say that she is in Shock, through the eyes of Sunset