My Jolly Sailor Bold

You, Anon, were on your nightly stroll across the pier of the beach late at night, when you were captured in intoxicating spell, delivered by none other than Adagio Dazzle.

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Comment posted by Fetch deleted Nov 15th, 2023

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Fetch #2 · Nov 15th, 2023 · 1 · ·

A good rendition of this song:
https://youtu.be/HbQSOwZPV_E?si=yZe5RvbNNUX4c2nF

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SonicSpeedster97 #3 · Nov 15th, 2023 · · ·

Not gonna lie; when I saw the cover art, I immediately remembered that I posted this on Reddit a while ago.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #4 · Nov 27th, 2023 · 1 · ·

This was certainly a very atmospheric story. You lean hard on the mood and descriptions, which is certainly appropriate for this type of story, although I feel the execution was dragged down a bit by the mechanical errors and odd word choice that kept the prose from flowing well. I think if this had gotten a little more proofreading it could have been a solid little story.

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