Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.
Wheatley, a core from Aperture Science never thought that he would ever see the Earth up close after being banished, doomed to float around the moon forever. That was however until magic got involved and a special unicorn pulled him down to earth. Well, not exactly Earth, but it's a new home at least.
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Curious story you present. I'm intrigued to see where you take it.
Hmmm. This looks like it could be an entertaining story. REALLY liked the main group's first encounter with Wheatley (he's obviously calmed down about being called a moron if he is openly calling himself that, even if he's trying to trick the Mane 5). And Opaline has encountered the Space Core? Yikes.
Of course, I have to ask, if this one is before or after Misty reformed and joined the main group. If it's after, then the main group already knows about Opaline. But that's only a minor detail for later other than maybe Misty giving the group the info on Opaline meeting the Space Core.
But, anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are well done and I'm certainly looking forward to more of this.
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Most of the chapter was written before I had even watch Chapters Four and Five. So I am unsure where in the timeline it would belong. to be fair, I still have to figure out what exactly is special about Wheatley and Space Core. Opaline is more for magic, not tech
You miss name the core two times here.
I would think that seeing a robotic eye manipulated by an AI would scare them, or at least surprise them more than what they show, but they also have quite advanced technology... perhaps Wheatley is not that far from what they can understand.
REALLY good work on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up here. Took a while but was definitely worth the wait. REALLY liked the Mane Five chatting with Wheatley and coming up with theories on how he ended up getting pulled down from the moon to their world. And, yeah, Wheatley had a surprisingly good point about how the ponies ARE animals (albeit sapient animals - of course the same thing is true about humans) when Pipp commented about animal testing. Wheatley's reaction to the technology the ponies have (such as the smart phone and the Marestream) and finding out about Sparky were also well done. Admittedly, I felt bad for Posey walking in at the wrong time and I hope the gang doesn't end up making a big mistake by trying to help Wheatley get a body (of course, as long as the body isn't larger than pony-sized, they should be all right with a five on one numbers advantage in the event that this DOES turn out to be a mistake).
But, anyway, really looking forward to more of this. And Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends.
Idk y but if a song for Wheatley comes to mind. Is it alright if u put the Wheatley rap if he wants to talk about himself. Not sure if it’s possible but it’s up to u if h want to put it in
You misnamed the core here:
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I assume that there should be a comma and not a period.
Unless that line is Wheatley's thought, that 'me' must be a 'him'.
These spontaneous adaptations are 'The power of the Narrator!!!' Or is it a thing that will be explained and eventually play a role in the story?
There is a missing period on those two lines.
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oh thanks, also well for the adapting thing I'm unsure. Hadn't thought it fully through. Didn't mean for it to come across as annoying.
Well, maybe Space core can get fire magic from Opaline uh..
Nothing like that, at all. I was actually enjoying them as a sort of running gag, but then I got the idea that maybe there was going to be more to them than that.
Thanks immensely for getting this next chapter up. Took a while, but was definitely worth the wait. REALLY liked the gang taking Wheatley to Gearbox as well as the explanation of hands (including Zipp's thinking of where the Griffons are these day). The description of Wheatley's new body in the author's notes was another good touch. Hopefully, the gang will remember to NOT make Wheatley's new body TOO big and powerful.
Anyway, really looking forward to more of this.
Now, imagine if this is Wheatley's next body upgrade.i.pinimg.com/736x/4e/33/a2/4e33a2ce8a2720abd227da95e89f7025.jpg