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Ooh I'm the first comment. Happy me. I truly enjoyed your story. The characters are interesting. The sex is hot. But it was a little off in some points like v mentality and how easy it was for her to give up control to equivalently what is a stranger? I think some parts were rust in. On top of that, some parts of the story felt left out or had me questioning a character's decision.
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Yay! Finally a comment! Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the honest criticism.
No problem. I truly enjoyed your story, but I felt it could have been longer in some things could have been lay it out.
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Yes, I meant to go more into Beaux and Octavia's histories, but it took 5 months to get out what should've taken 5 weeks. I needed to finish it.