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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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That was heavy. You should read my own Vinyl Scratch/Octavia ship. It's titled "Vinyl Gets Scratched". You'll be impressed.
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I'll check it out.
Where did you get the image at?
Have you considered my ideas?
10055997
Which ones? Need a refresher.
nice. bit rough around the edges, got a bit too much telling instead of showing, but this is smutty fanfiction. overall, a good story.
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Thanks!
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One involving Spike outlasting the Dazzlings but I've might've told that to someone else.
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Outlasting them in sex? Only write Spike as a dog in Equestria Girls, I'm afraid, but if you don't mind bestiality...
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In human form.
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I don't write human Spike, sorry.
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Dragon Spike then?
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I could but what would the Dazzlings be? Sirens? Need a little more than that for a premise.
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Anthro.
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Try to think up a stronger premise; Spike outlasts the Dazzlings in sex doesn't inspire me much. Would prefer a stronger scenario to get the creative juices flowing.
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How about this: Spike saying something to the Dazzlings that no one have the absolute balls to say to them: Calling them out and challenging them to an anything goes competition?
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Thanks, that's more workable. Can't promise when though as I'm stacked with other projects/requests.
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Plus Valentine's Day is coming soon.
So sexy and great. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks!
That's some hot and sexy stuff!
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Thank you!
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-Does a pretty good job of describing their bodies and outfits, making it easy to visualize their sexiness.
-Pretty superficial -- it doesn't go as deep into what's going on as it could.
-The characters aren't built up very much, nor is the tension. They go from one story point to another without much in the way of feeling.
-"It's a double-bass you uncultured swine," she hissed under her breath. -- this line was great. It really emphasizes the differences between them.
------ Scores ------
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Cloppability: 80/100
Allure: 50/100
Enticement: 40/100
Immersion: 75/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 335/500
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