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Of kirins and firefighters

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Typical firefighter day in Canterlot. Everything is boring and routine as long as there are no curious Kirin tourists nearby. They are burning with interest and have no idea about firefighters. For damages, please contact the officials.

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redmar

redmar #1 · Jul 20th, 2023 · · ·

This quite funny but not as good as Fire Safety. Explaining things from both sides and seeing the reactions might have improved it.

Chaos_Silver

Chaos_Silver #2 · Jul 20th, 2023 · · ·

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Thank you for your attention and advice! Wrote it in a couple of hours under a strange attack of inspiration but without planning.

Azure Drache

Azure Drache #3 · Jul 20th, 2023 · · ·

Good story, thoughthe writing style could be improved, maybe let an editor or pre-reader have a look.

Chaos_Silver

Chaos_Silver #4 · Jul 20th, 2023 · · ·

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I'm glad you liked it and I'm grateful for the advice!

NaviNautical

NaviNautical #5 · Jul 21st, 2023 · · ·

You know, after the Last Problem, I wonder how many more fire fighters were introduced to Equestria since the kirin moved in! This was a cute read, loved it!