silly little thing - 18, she/her.
Twilight Sparkle is given a task by Princess Celestia to help aid Luna in her dream realm duties. A seemingly random thing to do, but Twilight happily accepted the job, despite the princesses acting... oddly.
And, oh Celestia.
It's not what Twilight expected.
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So, this is your first story? I have to say, I really admire your writing skill, this was freaking hilarious and... very confusing. But nonetheless, I really look forward to whatever comes after this (Luna better fess up to whatever the hell's going on). Consider me hooked.
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yeah, it is. thank you, though! means a lot :3
if people enjoy this enough, I'll definitely write a little sequel.
I really enjoyed the more casual prose on this! Usually in comedy fics, the prose is more serious, leaving comedic moments to dialogue and small remarks by the narrator. The way you did it is pretty unique to me and I think it works pretty well :)
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thank u!! I thought it'd fit better, especially with Luna's less-than-royal tone.
This is pretty good and funny
I expected that somehow luna and celestia had swapped minds with the CMC or something like that. but actually they were just being quirky
Your writing style is great, it's just the dialogues that don't sound like the pony they belong to. Either way, great story. Hope you write more