Welcome to Equestria, Cooper Gang
Twilight, after filling out a bunch of paperwork, and refusing to press charges, Sly was free to walk out of the courthouse with her. He steps outside with her, cane in hand. The moon was high in the sky, and the streets were empty. Twilight stretches her back like a dog, it had been a very long day for her.
"Alright Sly, my home is...this...way?" Twilight turns around to see that Sly was nowhere around her.
"S-Sly?... Sly!... SLY COOPER!? Great! The very moment I turn my back you make a break for it! I knew it! I knew not to trust a thief! I can't go back and undo all that paperwork, GAH!"
Twilight began to storm off towards her home at Golden Oak Library. Since Sly still had both police files in his backpack, she would have to come up with a plan to hunt him down and find him. She approaches her home, her brow furrowing with anger. She pretty much barges in after unlocking it, and turns on the lights.
"SPIKE!? Come here, I need you to write a letter."
"If you're talking about that purple lizard, he's asleep four-legs." Sly's voice startles her as she quickly turns and sees Sly casually lounging on her couch, his feet up on her coffee table and his arms behind his back. His cane rested against the wall next to him.
"Huh? But you... you just... wait... wait what!?" Twilight gave the Raccoon a confused and surprised expression.
"Cool your jets there four-legs, I never left you."
"Stop calling me that! Where did you go!?"
"Streets aren't my thing, so I climbed up onto the rooftops and followed you while up there. Once I saw you approaching this treehouse, I came in through your bedroom window. Now that I think about it, the ponies here really should start locking those. Anyway, I saw your friend asleep, and I sat here waiting for you to come in."
Twilight was grinding her teeth. She wanted to strangle him with her magic. She swore he ditched her, and by the smug look on his face, it seemed like that was the main reason he did that. She wasn't going to play his games, she wasn't here for his amusement. She let's out a frustrated grunt and turned her back on him. She entered her kitchen, she hadn't eaten since she went to Canterlot earlier that day. She opens her fridge, looking for something to snack on. She levitated out a bag of carrots and a pitcher of grape juice. When she turns away from the fridge, Sly was there right behind her. She jumps back, startled to see him there. Her jump caused her to splash juice in her own face.
"Got anything for me? I haven't eaten all day."
"For Celestia's sake make some noise next time!"
Sly looks at her and chuckles as her face is covered in grape juice. He grabbed the juice and carrots out of her aura, and saw a roll of paper towels on the counter. He grabs them and hands them to her. Twilight looks at the towels and takes them, unrolling two sheets and ripping them off before wiping the juice off her face.
"Sorry, habit of mine. I don't like to make too much noise."
"It's fine, just please be mindful next time. What kind of food do you eat, Sly? I don't mind sharing for now."
"Hmm... Anything really. I don't have a preference."
Twilight nods and uses her magic to levitate out different foods from her cabinet and fridge for Sly to choose from. He ended up going with a bowl of an oat based cereal, and an apple. Twilight makes herself a salad and the two of them go back into the library. Sly sits back down on the couch, while Twilight sits in a chair. Things were deafeningly silent, which made Twilight uncomfortable, especially when she had a bipedal raccoon for a guest.
"So... Sly. What made you become a thief?"
"It's a family business."
"Really? That's interesting! So you parents are thieves too?"
"My dad was, and he was one of the best."
"What's his name."
"... ... Conner."
Twilight took notice at Sly's hesitation. When she glances at him, she also notices a change in his body language. His shoulder slumped, and the smirk he was known for had vanished. His eyes, which were usually so quick and analytical, went soft, only focussing on the bowl of cereal in front of him. Sly on the other hand felt strange. It's been awhile since he spoke his father's name. Though he thought of his father everyday, it was mostly his thoughts for revenge against the Fiendish Five. But talking and thinking about him casually, was something he hasn't done for a long time. He let out a soft sigh, as he took another bite from his cereal.
"Is everything alright Sly?"
"Yeah, I will be."
"Is something wrong?"
"...Yeah... My dad... he is no longer around. He died when I was 8 years old."
Twilight's eyes widened, she had no idea Sly's dad was dead. She felt bad for bringing up the subject.
"Oh!... I'm sorry Sly. I didn't know, I'll change the subject."
"No, it's fine. It's one of the reasons I'm tracking down the Fiendish Five anyway."
Twilight's eyes shot back up to Sly. He had lowered the bowl from his chest, now resting it in his lap. He was staring off in one direction, a facial expression he had barely ever worn, a scowl.
"I was 8 years old when the Fiendish Five broke into my home. My dad tried to fight them off, while my mother did her best to hide me... They killed them both."
Twilight's hoof went to her mouth. She had no idea that the Fiendish Five, had killed Sly's parents. She looks at him, with sorrowful eyes. He may be a bit annoying, but she had no idea he harbored that kind of pain. One question however, was on her mind.
"...Why did they kill them?" Twilight leaned forward towards Sly, he only sighed at her question.
"...Look, it's not that I don't trust you, but I really don't feel like getting into it until my pals, Bentley and Murray are here."
Twilight nods her head to him, letting out a sigh of her own. She looked towards the clock, it was approaching midnight, and by how busy Twilight has been today, she felt like now was as good as any time to go to bed. She uses her magic to lift her empty salad bowl, and Sly's empty cereal bowl out of his hands.
"I think it's about time I head to bed, you can sleep on the couch. Let me take care of these dishes and i'll bring you a blanket and a pillow."
"Thanks Twilight."
Twilight's ears perked up and she looked back at Sly. He just referred to her by her name, and not "Four-Legs." She could see that his arms were crossed and he was looking at the floor. Her ears flop again as she turns back around to head into the kitchen. After placing the dishes into the sink, she goes to her closet, and pulls out her spare blanket and pillow. She levitates it to him and he thanks her.
"If you need anything Sly, I will just be upstairs. Goodnight."
"'Night."
Twilight trotted upstairs, she sees Spike asleep in bed, she smiles and gently caresses his back. She climbs into bed and lays down with a sigh. She uses her magic to levitate a book she was half finished with to her. She began to read, but her mind was too preoccupied with Sly. After about 10 minutes of Twilight having to re-read the same page because of how distracted she was, she sighs and sets the book down. She looks to her window, moonlight glowing through it, shining on her face.
"Hoo?"
"Gah! Oh... Owlicious!" Twilight turns to her pet owl, and her number 2 assistant who had perched on her headboard. She pats his head and to which Owlicious happily nuzzles against her hoof. Twilight couldn't help but giggle at the loving bird.
"Sorry buddy, don't think I'm staying up studying tonight. You can take it easy tonight... wait a minute... unless..."
"Hoo?"
"Actually, Maybe you can do something for me tonight!"
Twilight uses her magic to levitate a scroll and quill. She quickly writes down a small note, and then uses a spell to make 4 extra copies of the note. She rolls all five of them up, and then ties them together with a ribbon before giving them to Owlicious. The owl uses its wings to lift up off the headboard, and grabs ahold of the ribbon which held the five notes.
"Could you drop those off to my friends for me Owlicious? I would most appreciate it."
"Hoo!"
Twilight opens her window and Owlicious flies right out. Twilight leaves the window open for when he comes back, and she lays back down in bed. She pulls her covers up with her magic, and she is finally able to relax. She closes her eyes and she finally drifts off to asleep.
Twilight groggily wakes up to a sudden tugging on her tail. She lifts her head up and yawns, when she looks back to see who is tugging her, she is met with a slightly unsure expression by Spike.
"S-Spike? What do you need?... What time is it?"
"Twilight... who exactly is the raccoon dude who is in our home?"
She rolls her eyes and slowly climbs out of bed. He was asleep last night, so he wouldn't know who Sly is yet.
"He's a guest Spike, he stayed the night last night. His name is Sly." Twilight said as she stretched like a dog.
"Oh, I know. Me and him have been talking all morning while I helped him find some of your books."
"Huh? Wait really?"
"Uh-huh. All he told me was his name, and you invited him over, but he wouldn't tell me anything else."
Twilight makes her way downstairs with Spike right behind her. To her surprise Sly was in fact up, and was sitting on a chair at her table with a few books open. He actually really wasn't sitting, he had his feet on the seat and he was crouched down way low. He had a book in his hand and he seemed to have a weird expression on his face. After hearing Twilight's hoofsteps behind him, he looks back at her and smirks.
"Morning Four-Legs."
"Ugh... Morning Sly."
"I'll be honest, your world is super weird." He closed the book he was holding and he set it back on the table.
"Huh? how so?" Twilight uses her magic to pour herself a cup of coffee that was already made by Spike.
"Where do I even start? Unicorns, Pegasi, and Earth Ponies are the main types of ponies you will meet in Equestria, but there are more species that still dwell here like Griffons, Cows, and Deer? Not only that, Your weather is manually controlled by Pegasi, your city names resemble the ones from my home, and you have two immortal Alicorn Princesses that rule over all of you."
"Sly... Have you been studying?" Twilight began to smile wide at the Raccoon thief, who slowly stepped off the chair to stretch his back.
"A little, your little purple dragon friend has been helping me all morning. I want to get to know this place a little more, seeing how the Fiendish Five is here in your home, and I may be tracking them here."
"Really?"
"Yeah, I read it all in the Equestrian Police file. It tells us the last sightings of the Fiendish Five, but I'm definitely going to need help in finding these locations. I have no idea where to find... Baltimare and these other places."
"Wow, you have been reading. I do say I am a bit impressed with you, Sly."
Twilight gave him a cheeky grin to which he just sticks his tongue out at her. Their conversation was interrupted by a sudden knock on the door. They both turn to look at it, Sly was looking for a quick place to hide, but before he could, Spike was already at the door. He opens it, and five other ponies began to spill into the library.
"Hey Twilight! We came as soon as we got your letter." A rainbow-maned pegasus said as she flew in.
Sly was just about to duck in cover, before he noticed two more figures enter the library, one short, and the other pretty big. Sly's eyes widened as he recognized the both of them.
"Murray! Bentley!" Sly shouted, which caught the attention of both of them.
"SLY!" Murray yelled, as he charged his way towards Sly, wrapping his large arms around him and squeezing tight.
"Oh it's so good to see you buddy!"
"Murray! Ribs... ribs are breaking!" Sly gasped as Murray pretty much squeezed the air out of him. Murray eventually lets him go, as Sly finally was able to catch his breath. Bently approaches Sly and once Sly catches his breath they both hug each other as well. Twilight herself then approaches her friends.
"I don't understand, how did you guys find them so quickly? I had only sent you my letter last night! I was only asking for your guys's help looking for two strange looking creatures".
"Ya can thank me and Fluttershy fer that. " Said the orange farm pony.
"Um... yeah. It was our pleasure."
Twilight Smiles at them before shifting her eyes back onto Sly and his two friends. Sly and his friends then look to Twilight and her friends, there was a big question on Sly's mind.
"Four-Legs, I don't understand. What's going on?"
"Last night when we went to bed, I sent a letter to my friends here to help us look for your friends. But I wasn't expecting them to be found so quickly!" Twilight looked back to her friends and Sly to his.
"What happened to you guys?"
"I would be happy to fill you in on our absence Sly."
Bentley
Bentley slowly wakes up, he was laying on his shell, looking towards the sky.
"Whoa... my vertigo is acting up again... Sly, Murray, a little help here?" Bentley called out as he was stuck on his back. He tried to rock himself forward, but he was unable too.
"Guys? Seriously, you know this isn't funny." Bentley lifted his head up, he seemed to be in the middle of a dirt road, and his friends were nowhere in sight. Bentley audibly gulps when realizing there was no-one there to help him.
"Alright Bentley... you gotta try to get up yourself, otherwise... who knows who will come across you. And a 1, and a 2, and a 3!" Bentley was struggling trying to get up off his shell, but in the end, it was no use, the best he could do was to spin himself slowly. He sighed as he looked up into the sky which only spun slowly.
"Well... I'm doomed." Bentley sighed once again before having another look around.
"I wonder where I am? This place doesn't seem to be anywhere near a volcano." Bentley's train of thought is cut off when he hears the noise of something approaching. He gasps and quickly retracts all parts of his body into his shell, his glasses fall onto the ground when he does. He began to shake inside his shell, hoping whoever was coming across him was friendly.
"Oh my goodness! You poor poor thing!" A soft and gentle voice could be heard. Bentley stayed in his shell, still unsure of the person's actions.
"How did you end up like this little guy? Let me help you." Bentley could feel whoever was there touch him on the back of the shell and gently flip him back over.
"There, that's better isn't it?" Bentely slowly began to peek out of his shell, the only thing he could see was a fuzzy block of yellow. Upon this discovery, Bentley became increasingly confused, he needed his glasses.
"It's ok little guy, I won't hurt you. You can come on out to say thank you." Still being largely unsure, he didn't sense any incoming danger. He slowly began to come out of his shell, however the thing that helped gasped upon Bentley standing upright.
"*Ahem!* Thank you Ma'am, I had no idea how long I would be like that. It's a bit humiliating if I'm being completely honest. By now, Bentley had picked up his glasses and had put them on. In front of him was a yellow horse with a pink mane... and she stood on 4 legs.
"Y-you can talk!?" The yellow horse said in a lot of surprise.
"Why are you walking on four legs? Most interesting."
"Oh! This is so exciting! A turtle who can talk!"
"I beg your pardon?"
"Oh there are so many questions I would love to ask you! Would you like to come to my cottage for some tea?" the Yellow horse had the biggest smile on her face. Bentley hesitated for a moment, but without anyone else around him, he figured he could ask her some questions as well. More specifically about where he was exactly.
"Well then, it certainly would be unwise not to accept. Very well, lead the way Miss...?"
"Fluttershy! You can call me Fluttershy!"
"Ok then Ms. Fluttershy, you can call me Bentley. Please lead the way."
Golden Oak
"After a lengthy discussion, Me and Miss Fluttershy got an understanding of each other. I learned of the place we are in and I have come to the conclusion we are no longer in our own world."
"Gee, one look around you could have told you that. Weird 4 legged horses are everywhere. That's a big red flag right there." Sly then looked to his hippo friend and gave him a smile."What about you big guy?"
"Oh, it's a long and awesome story... you got any gum?"
Murray
Murray was snoring loudly, he was sprawled across the top of the Cooper van and drool leaked from his mouth. he snorted himself awake and with a quick jolt, he accidentally fell off the top of the van and landed on his stomach. The impact was hard and loud as Murray let out an audible "Oof!" as he landed.
"Oh, ow... what a thunder flop." He said to himself as he picked himself up. He looked around his surroundings and he found himself surrounded by trees. "Oh wow... Where am I? Sly!? Bentley!?"
Murray called out to his friends, but no answer came. He looked at his van and opened the driver door. He looked in and found nothing, he was alone. He closed the door and his ears drooped down.
"What happened? Is this heaven? Did the volcano erupt and now we're dead!?" Murray began to panic. He turned and ran face first hard against one of the trees. The force of him hitting the tree caused an apple to shake loose and fall on his head. He looked down at it, and soon his mouth began to water.
"It's been awhile since I had a snack, perhaps just one." Murray bent over and grabbed the apple before placing the whole thing in his mouth. He bit down and crushed it, it's juices filling his mouth. His ears perked back up and he licked his lips.
"Wow! That's the best apple I ever had!" Murray looked up and saw the tree was full of apples. He licked his lips again and began to reach for another. He was unable to reach them, he sighs before looking at the trunk. He got an idea, if force knocked the first apple down, perhaps it needed more. He reeled back his fist and punched the log. about 4 more apples fell down into his arms. A large smile began to form across his face.
"Sweetness! Perhaps I should start bulking up, after my snack of course." Murray began to eat the apples that had fallen down. He was so distracted that he wasn't able to hear the sound of someone approaching.
"What in tarnation!?" A loud female voice sounded, startling Murray and he turned with an apple still in his mouth. In front of him was an orange pony on all fours staring at him like he was a monster. Murray let out a quick yelp and dove behind the van.
"Yipe! G-go away!" Murray cried out as he held his hands over his head. That's when the pony's expression went from shocked fear, to puzzling-confusion. That thing was probably 3 times her size, yet he was afraid of her? She shook her head and slowly approached the van.
"Now, now. I ain't gonna hurt ya." Applejack said in a calm voice. She heard Applebloom talking about a weird sound coming from the orchard, she came out to investigate, and was not expecting to come across anything. Murray slowly peeked out from behind the van, he was shaking badly.
"Y-you swear? I-I'm no fighter..." Murray's voice was shaky. He saw the orange pony take off her hat with her hoof.
"Ah swear, now come on out of there. Let's get a good look at ya." She encouraged. Slowly Murray began to step out from behind the van, and at his full height. Applejack's eyes widen at the sheer size of him. "Whoa nelly. Pretty sure ah'm sa'possed to be scared of you, and not the other way 'round." Her accent was thick.
"I... I'm not out very much, I just drive the van... who... who are you?" the hippo asked the pony who placed her hat back on her head.
"Names Applejack, pardner. And you?"
"Murray!"
"Murray huh? What in the hay are ya sa'possed to be anyway? And why are ya in my orchard?"
"If I'm being completely honest... I have no idea. I was with my pals one second, the next thing I know I'm out here all alone with my van."
Applejack eyes Murray and his van closely. She made her judgment of him right then and there.
"Well, Murray. It just ain't in my nature just ta leave ya like ya are. How about you come up to the barn with me and maybe We can figure out how I can help ya."
"Ok, that sounds good to me. Mind if I park the van there as well?"
"Me and Applejack are pretty much pals after spending the entire night talking! She's awesome you guys! She can cause all the apples on an apple tree to fall off with a single kick!"
"Aw Shucks." Applejack kicks at the ground and blushes.
"Well, it's great to know you guys weren't alone last night." Sly said before all three of them began hugging again.
"Uh, Twilight darling, some of us are still a bit out of the loop here." A marshmallow pony spoke up, causing Twilight to look back at her friends.
"Sorry Girls. Uh, This is Sly and his friends. We met last night as well. Sly, these are my friends, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash." Sly nods to all of them as Twilight points to each one as she calls them by name.
"Pleasure, I'm Sly Cooper. These are my pals, Bentley and Murray." Sly uses his cane to point to his friends.
"Ooo! New friends! How did you meet Sly Twilight!?" Pinkie was bouncing up and down in place.
"Now that right there is an interesting story."
Both Sly and Twilight took a moment to explain their encounter with each other. Sly explaining when he first woke up, and Twilight explaining how she just came back from Canterlot and was headed to the courthouse. They then explain their first encounter where Sly stole from Twilight and tried to escape, and was finally captured after Sly fell from the chandelier. They talked about their discussion and their agreement which only led to more questions than answers.
"Wait! So this raccoon stole from you!?" Rarity said in shock.
"I have a name Marshmallow." Sly crosses his arms
"M-Marshmallow!" Rarity narrows her eyes and her cheeks flare red.
"Okay everypony! Settle down."
"Twilight, I'm still a bit confused. What in the hay were you even doing with police files anyway?" Asked Rainbow Dash, flying and hovering in front of Twilight. Her eyes widened, she had completely forgotten to tell her friends about the Elements of Harmony.
"Girls... you might want to sit down for this." Twilight's voice hinted at a bit of dread. The five ponies look at each other before looking back at Twilight with worried faces. All of them sit down as Twilight lets out a shaky sigh.
"Yesterday morning, the Princess requested I come to Canterlot at once. Of course I answered her summons, and what she told me..." Twilight turns her head to the side. "The Elements of Harmony have been stolen."
This news was met with loud gasps from the group of ponies. Their eyes widening and their jaws dropping. However Sly Bentley, and Murray just look at each other with confused faces.
"Te' elements are stolen'!?"
"Yes... And Celestia believes the Fiendish Five are the main suspects. So I went to the courthouse to retrieve the police files on them, and track them down." Bentley and Murray raise their Eyebrows at the mention of the Fiendish Five.
"T-The f-f-Fiendish Five?" Fluttershy squeaked and hid behind her mane.
"I think I've heard of them... They are a crime group that were started in Equestria about 2 years ago." Rarity put her hoof to her chin.
"What do those chumps want with the Elements!?" Rainbow scowled and was punching her hooves together.
"I don't entirely know why they want them, which is why you need to fill us in now Sly." Twilight turned to Sly. "The Fiendish Five are originally from your world, and why are you guys trying to find them? I know you said that they... killed your father Sly, but you never explained why they did that." Sly looks to his friends, they all give each other a look before Sly turns his attention back to Twilight.
"Well, I told you last night that thieving was the family business. I really meant that, as my family, the Cooper family, have been thieves for thousands of years. During this time, my ancestors have been perfecting their thieving moves, by documenting them in an ancient book." Sly reaches into his backpack and pulls out a book. He hands it To Twilight who takes it with her magic.
"The... Thievius Raccoonus?... Wait... Where are the pages!? Who would do such a thing to a book!"
"That's what the Fiendish Five was after. They broke into my home, killed my parents, and ripped the pages of the Thievius Raccoonus. They are using my ancestor's techniques to commit horrible crimes. After my parents were killed, I was dumped at an orphanage. But it wasn't all bad, that was where I met these guys and... they have been my life long friends ever since." Sly looks back at his friends, who smile at him. Sly smiles back at them before looking back to Twilight and the other ponies."So, I made a promise to myself that I would track down the Fiendish Five, avenge my father, and steal back my birthright."
Twilight looks up at Sly for a brief moment and then back at the Thievius Raccoonus. She may not fully understand the sentiment of this book. But she knew that she and Sly had a similar goal, to bring down the Fiendish Five. Even if they don't have the elements, at least they can take down their criminal empire.
"Alright Sly, I'll help you take down the Fiendish Five. To get back your book, and our elements."
"Yeah, your elements... Uh... what are the elements?" Said Sly as he crosses his arms.
"The Elements of Harmony are Equestria's greatest essence of Magic. They can be used as weapons, when used together, they unleash a very powerful magic where they can turn you to stone, expel darkness from your heart, and possibly even more outcomes. Magic that strong could possibly do anything."
"Hold on, let me take a moment to soak that in." Bentley began to think to himself. "The concept of Magic is still new to me... but I think I can come up with a hypothesis on why the Fiendish Five could want something that powerful."
"I suggest we locate one of the Fiendish Five members, once we confront them we could interrogate them on why they would need the elements."
"That's a fantastic idea! Whatever force brought us here, it had to have brought us here for a reason. That reason is to stop whatever the Fiendish Five is planning to do with the Elements of Harmony."
"Can't help but agree. Alright, get ready, because we are going after the Fiendish Five immediately!"
"I'll go get the van! It'll be easier to travel here with it!"
"Sounds good to me big guy." Sly then turns to Twilight and points at her with his cane. "You too Four-Legs. You're coming with us. Being a local here you can show us the way and help us out with anything natural from this world."
"It would be my pleasure Sly." Twilight smiles before turning to her friends. "Ok Everypony. I know you all are just finding out about everything, but I could use your help in locating the elements. Being connected to the elements could help us in locating the exact location of the Elements when we arive to face each member of the Fiendish Five. I'm asking a lot from you all, but Equestria needs our help in returning the Elements, and stopping the Fiendish Five once and for all!"
"OH YEAH! I'm with you Twilight!"
"Same 'ere! Ah got yer back Twilight!"
"Me too, to get back the elements."
"Me three I wanna go on an adventure!"
"We would never turn our backs on you darling."
Twilight smiles at all her friends, their bravery has never ever disappoints her. She then feels a tugging on her tail. She turns to look and sees her number one assistant Spike tugging on her tail. He looks up at her with wide puppy dog eyes. She rolls her eyes and giggles.
"You can come too spike, if you promise to stay with us." Twilight giggles more as Spike smiles and pumps his fist.
"Murray, think there will be enough room in the van for all of them?"
"Of course! Should be plenty of room!"
"Good, alright everyone. Pack what you need." Said Sly as he picked up the Equestrian Police file. "We go after our first target as soon as we're all ready!"
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And so the adventure begins
Heh, not a comment on the story, but congrats on the featured box, sir.
Where is the fox that's chase sly around? I like to see how you deal with dynamic relationship between the two and the equestrians.
Sweet that Spike is part of this too
And avenge your mother too.
P.S. It's unique you are coloring the sentences on which character is saying them. I thought most people in here didn't like that, and prefer the normal white sentences?
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Yeah, I normally don't write like that. But since they do color it in the Sly Cooper games, I thought it would be fun.
Oh, I'm looking forward to when Bentley starts going Madden with the markers when drawing up the plans.
This story has been fun to read. It's got some spelling and grammar issues here and there, but no show-stoppers for me.
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Yeah, I apologize in advance for that. I have Dyselxia and I triple proofread the chapters myself, but mistakes still slip by. Thank you for giving this a read anyway!
Good story ^^
just out of Curious, When come nice chapter out ?
I'm glad to see Sly Cooper is being popular again.
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Will Sly 2, 3, and 4 happen?