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Many creatures were discovered, or rediscovered, by the Mane Six on their friendship quests. But rarely has a creature ever left their own land for the same thing. But this one, her own language, anguish, and fear; was brought up in the deepest, murkiest pits of a far off shoreline swampland. With ideas of an opportunity to help, the ponies also find that it will not be an easy task.

But, when has the ever been a friendship problem they couldn't handle.

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Pardon my atrocious writing, I have never done this before.

Personally, I am quite satisfied with this text.
but my opinion should not be taken seriously as I don't really know English.

That Mud must have understood, because she met Starlight’s gaze, and lowered her hoof back to her side, but still looking down at the bandage.

Mud is definitely smarter than my cat, because in a similar situation she ripped the bandage off her paw anyway.

when re-reading the chapter, the thought came to mind: why was only a text description of Mud sent to the search services? Wouldn't it be more efficient to send her a photo? a textual description is always worse than a visual image.
Although it would be interesting to see Mud's first reaction to the camera.

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oh right, i guess i never thought of that, but Mud will encounter cameras eventually. Thanks for commenting also!

in fact, come to think of it, Fluttershy must be the most indifferent to Mud's meat diet. Because among the animals that Flatershy watches are quite a lot of predators. (I doubt that she feeds the snakes, birds and bear fruit) Even squirrels are partial predators.
What's stopping you from cooking fish for Mud?

somehow Mud seems like a pretty civilized pony. Surprisingly little she shows the wild features of her old life.

Mud calmed a bit, fur settling along her spine. “It’s nothing. I just don’t want to leave.” She gestures a hoof around the room, “This place is way more than I could’ve dreamed of, I don’t want to go back.”

Fluttershy tilts her head, “What’s so wrong about your old home… Is it because you were bullied?” Mud grunts, “No! I told you, I can beat any Kelpie that comes around.”

I don't know why, but I like the plot where the character is a loner who ends up at the home of a hospitable character, does not want to admit that he needs help, but at the same time does not want to leave. :3

Hmm, Spike… How old is Mud, could Kelpies grow differently than Ponies? The image of what a fully grown Mud would look like formed in her mind. The equinoid towered over everyone, baring large teeth, bright amber eyes, and a muscle build that could rival Tirek.

Mud said that she is the strongest of her people. Therefore, some statements contradict others. It remains to find out who is lying, the book of Zekora or Mud

Hmm, Spike… How old is Mud, could Kelpies grow differently than Ponies? The image of what a fully grown Mud would look like formed in her mind. The equinoid towered over everyone, baring large teeth, bright amber eyes, and a muscle build that could rival Tirek.

Mud said that she is the strongest of her people. Therefore, some statements contradict others. It remains to find out who is lying, the book of Zekora or Mud

Do Kelpies eat meat in this story?

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yes, they are a carnivorous predators, but can live off of plants and bugs if there is not enough prey.

but Mud will get cupcakes, cause ponies don't hunt :)

I remember that during the colonization of America there were outbreaks of infections because the immunity of the local population was not ready for European diseases.

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exactly, which is why Mud had her shots.
but mainly the chief wanted the ponies gone, so he lied to get the tribe on his side.

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