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Lunar Flares?

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When Twilight recieves a distressed letter from Luna, she makes a hasty trip to the Crystal Empire to see what has Luna so alarmed. You'll be relieved to know that Sombra isn't back.

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Dinosaur12

Dinosaur12 #1 · Mar 1st, 2023 · · ·

So that's how it happens.

Oreng Pingvin

Oreng Pingvin #2 · Mar 1st, 2023 · · ·

Alicorns still have many secrets

Majestic_Donut

Majestic_Donut #3 · Oct 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

I just realized I’ve read this story before 😂

Anyways, it’s cute 😊 A little stiffly written and some minor sentence structure issues, but it’s an overall great premise.

I think Twilight could’ve reacted with more distress. She seemed waaaay too chill given the message she’s just received. “Well, I guess we should go.” vs. the more likely

Twi: OH MY GOSH!!! -hastily grabs Spike and teleports to the palace instantly-
Spike: can you warn me before you do that?
Twi: WHAT’S THE EMERGENCY?!! Changelings? Tirek?! Has Sombra returned from the depths?!?!
Luna: Um… no
Twi: Oh…

You know what I mean?