Another re-upload.
(The sex tag is there for one paragraph! It is not sis-cest)
Broken times, We all have 'em.
Everybody has an awkward experience as a teenager, some of us have several. Sweetie Belle had one too.
Keep in mind! This story takes place at a future point, the CMC are ages 17-18, making Rarity roughly 32.
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*snickers* Okay, I love how real this sounded and read. They sounded like actual sisters in this, and the twist at the end of Diamond and Sweetie being an item was fantastic. Also, yeah, I like that the thing with Rarity screwing Filthy Rich isn't treated as necessarily a good thing, but an understandable thing.
This story took me THERE...
Now those are some unusual pairings!
The could could use one more editing pass; I see couple of times when character names aren't capitalized, for example. Nevertheless, it was a fun read!
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LOL! I can see it.
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I noticed that as well. When re-uploading these old stories, I didn't want to change them too much. I see it as a way to gadge my own growth as a writer.
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Glad to hear it! I'm happy you enjoyed my little story.
We need more DiamondBelle stories.
Rarity... and Filthy... yeah... no. Just because his wife is a horrid person does not mean I would EVER pair him up with a pony like Rarity.
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Spike learned after going out with Gabby that beaks are hard on a guy,,, Real hard
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I want to jump off a
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You should definently finish it first.
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cliff...
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Oh, come now, this site harbors way worse. This is a slice of life story that takes place years beyond the show run.
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Now Rarity paired with Filthy Rich is forever stuck in my head
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I'm sorry, but it makes for a fun pairing. They are in the same age group and makes for a great sister dynamic for Sweetie and Diamond. [not in thos fic though.]
GOOD!
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I'm glad you finished it at the least. I hope you stepped off that cliff.
Probably in large part due to my bias in liking the idea, but I quite liked how Sweetie Belle being pretty good at magic canonically, having Twilight as a teacher was reflected here. It was a fun way to enable the awkward premise, which is also nice in how it isn't portrayed as "good," but not inherently "bad," given the circumstances, seeing as, well... it's kind of hard to imagine Spoiled as being a good partner. A gray area.
Their sibling dynamics were nice, and it was nice that Rarity was encouraging of her progress, the... awkwardness aside.
Neat little quick read.
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I appreciate your thoughts and I am glad you found it to be worth the read.