This is going to be rewritten at an undetermined date in the future.
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Hello Fimfiction. This is my first story here so any feedback from you guys will be helpfull.
Pros-Orginal concept, nice use of characters, even the use of foreign talk (Latin I belive:Hostis barbari! Impetūs!) which I loved.
Cons- That begining...the way it was organized,was that intentental, it looks like its all over the place.
Keep on going, Im enjoying myself over here. And welcome to FimFiction!
Next Chapter is here (finally)!
The Pegasi here are loosely based off of the late Roman Republic, early Roman Empire. Next chapter is going back to the earth ponies. I have no idea when it's going to be done.