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"Can you hear them? Can you hear the drums? Can you not hear the everlasting drums, beating endlessly?

I can hear them.

Soon, you shall all know who your true master is."

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Comments ( 117 )

Um, your quotations in the description are odd.

Just delete this comment if you want!

Looks interesting so far. Twilight as the master, I'm definitely watching this.

You bastard, I'm going to be hearing those drums all day now.

Twilight as the master has a shot of being quite good.

Hmm. I'll track this, but you need to watch your punctuation after dialogue. If you're using speech tags (he said, she said) you use a comma, question mark, or exclamation mark. Only us a period if the following sentence stands on its own. Also, if you DO use the speech tags, the next word isn't capitalized.

"I liked this story," he said.
"I REALLY loved this story!" he yelled.
"I... liked... this story?" he whispered.
"I liked this story." After typing the comment, Jake sat back in his chair.

Other than that, I really DID like this! :twilightsmile:

The drumming. Can't you hear it? Inside my head. I thought it would stop. But it never does. It never, ever stops. Inside my head. The drumming, Doctor, the constant drumming. It's everywhere. Listen. Listen. Listen. Here come the drums... here come... the drums.

Tap tap tap tap. Tap tap tap tap. Tap tap tap tap.

I don't know what it is about [this story]. It's just... It's like [it] just pulls you in. Do continue.

funny i was listening to this as reading it

THIS WOULDN'T BE A STORY WITHOUT ME!

Just dropping in to say hi, and good fic!
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interesting, I'll follow this to see were it goes :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! I will fix that in the next update.

[edit]

Fixed it. Thank you for pointing that out.

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The song that inspired the story.

It is always nice when some one dedicates a fic to my cause. The Master approves.
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Sigh. Don't ask me why, but this was the first thing my mind went to from the title and description.

Will still read, though.

The story is a bit strange, but I guess it has to be because you want twilight as the master...

The way its written is more tell then show, but that doesn't take to much away from the story...

Twilight is out of character, but then again she is the master...

I like Spike...

And Lastly, this story is based around the Master and not the Doctor. Which is exactly why this is going to be amazing!

Faved, Liked, Commented! 8/10 wouldn't bang, but it is a great concept and I can't wait to see where you go with it.

I give this story two thumbs up.
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1618943 This is incredibly weird. I'm listening to Silence and the End of All Things right now. Hooory sheeeet!

Finally a Master story :twilightsmile:
Update soon

*DING* ...

OH Snap... my Timey-Wimey Detector just went off... It goes 'ding' when there's stuff... :pinkiehappy:

Faved and followed... :twilightsheepish:

Pax

Yes! So we have Pinkie, twilight, and who knows what else. Yay! Twilight's the master. since the Toclefane were never seen again, I chose the Vashta Nerada as my favorite monster. The master seems to take the cake as best villain. It was nearly impossible to beat him with the toclefane by his side.

1620482 the traveling man is the best man

the only problem I have with this is the perception filter that would have kept her from opening it on her own, she'd need another person to at least push her in the direction of opening it, and I don't think that spike's interaction cuts it.

Out of all of the bad guys out there the Master is, with out a doubt, the most terrifying and horrible of them all.

The phrase 'great and terrible' sums up this concept quite well. I'm feeling :pinkiehappy: and :fluttershbad: at the same time.
Twilight was the Element of Magic/Friendship. Once she resumes being the Master, will the Element reject her or will it corrupt? So many possibilities. So much FUN!

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I plan to. I'm halfway done writing the second chapter. :twilightsmile:
Now I hope I just don't mess up. :twilightsheepish:

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I didn't even think about that. Thank you for informing me about this perfect plot point!

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My crackfic sence is tingling. :trollestia:

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I shall not fail you...I hope...Wish me luck!

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Ya, I think I messed up there. :twilightsheepish:

The New chapter is up. I'm a little worried about my characterization of the Master. If I mess that up then everything will just fall apart.

Also, I've re-edited the first chapter. It's still pritty much the same, but I fixed some gramatical mistakes and I think that it reads a little bit better now.

I definately want to see where this goes

1624409 Well one of the beauties of the doctor who universe is that every time a time lord regenerates he/she retain their memories but not necessarily their personalities. So seeing as the master regenerated to Twilight it does not mean that her personality has to be the same as the previous master, for just like the doctor who's personality changes, Twilight can be more humane, volatile, compassionate, rational, analytic etc. So as long as she is essentially the master the characterization is not necessary a problem ^^

To quote River Song: "Spoiler Alert!" ..... ... Celestia's in for a surprise... :trollestia:

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You make a good point.
Thank you. It feels like a mountain of worry has been lifted from my sholdiers. :twilightsmile:

Pax

“Tai?”
Should be Tia
No I'm not an editor. that just stuck out.

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Fixed. Thank you for pointing that out.

Well. Celestia is certainly in for a surprise. :trollestia:

By the by, 'welding' isn't spelled 'wielding'. To wield is to hold something. Welding is a process that binds materials together. Feel free to delete this comment. Just giving my two bits.

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Thank you for the correction.

I don't have a proof reader so if any of you find mistakes please tell me. Or not. Do what ever you want.

The Master's comment about hating being a pony leaves me to believe that this is occurring sometime within Doctor Who canon (as apposed to AU pony versions that already exist as ponies). So when, DW continuity-wise, does this take place?

Anyone can answer this: when the Time Lord mind returns, is the new personality erased completely, or just sorta assimilated? Cuz now I kinda wanna see what would happen if you combined the Master's crazy with Twilight's OCD.

Edit: something else occurred to me: Twilight's cutie mark has to be different now, right? Makes sense to me.

Canterlot is going to be a crater:pinkiecrazy:

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Well, the Chameleon Arch rewrites biology. The Time Lords of this universe look like ponies, but their not. They are Time Lords. Just like how the Time Lords in Doctor Who Cannon look like Humans, but are not. So yes, this is one of those AU universes.

1630134 I could have used the phrase 'pony shaped'. But that's essentially what I meant, yes. That this takes places in a ponyish AU DW universe.

Nox

I have slightly mixed feelings about this. One one hand this is awesome, on the other...I really hope Twilight didn't just get erased/absorbed completely. There has to be some of that adorkable unicorn in their somewhere.:twilightoops:

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I love how you used the Chameleon Arch to change him. I was think of writing a Doctor who fic where he is changed into a pony by that. Makes more sense than him just randomly changing.

I like where this is going, but Luna seems a bit off to me. Celestia is all good, though.

“I cannot believe how long I was an, ugh, pony.”

The Master. Hates being a pony, is still a pony. Ha-ha, the Irony. :rainbowlaugh:

Good show man.

Liked and Faved. I've always been on the look-out for a ponified Master. Having Twilight be him is a delightfully evil and creative twist!

The Third Chapter is out! I'm on a role.

Also, longest chapter yet!

Loving the story so far can't wait to read more.

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