Sweetie Belle reacts to her sister’s betrayal.
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When's the baby comin'?
YES!!! It continues!
Maybe I'm a bad person for liking this, but theres just something about seeing Rarity, whom on the surface seems practically perfect in every perceivable way, just fall apart behind closed doors because the image that she built her life around is just so hard to keep together. Don't get me wrong I'm sympathetic to the hardships she's facing but it's like a bad car crash, I know it's horrible but I just can't look away.
And Sweetie Belle! wow! She could have gotten mad, I mean bring a boy home and the first thing he does is your sister, she had every right to be mad but no! She could see that Rarity was hurting and she rushed to comfort her sister.
To this day it still boggles my mind that you can somehow write characters with so much depth within the confines of only a thousand words. This is by far my favorite story series and I'm so excited to see what happens next!
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Aww, thank you! I feel honored to have such thoughtful readers, and am encouraged by comments like yours.
When I starting out I felt that Sweetie’s reaction was critical in shaping the story’s identity. I imagined a few directions in which the story could go, but ultimately decided that this one best represented her character; at least, her character as I saw it. I’m glad my consideration was not in vain.
I look forward to exploring these characters further, and am glad I am not alone. Cheers!