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A guy who thought I'd be a good idea to write the story he's been thinking of. Hope you like it as much as I do!!

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Did the 'Spring Fling' not happen here, cause most of CHS passed through (Everfree, Ponyville) on their way back (not to mention that Dash and Sci-Twi had a [small] talk with the Princess) ... :facehoof:

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Ok, I'll think I get your question, so, I believe you want to know if the events of the first movie happened in this story? If that's the case, then let me assure you, it did happen, I just haven't found the exact spot where to include those events. Now, the concept I'm using of different universes is totally different from the dimensional link between Equestria and CHS, they coexist in a universe (like a bubble), but the whole plot focuses on the conflict out of their universe. I'm aware that all CHS knows about Equestria's existence, but not about Halo's universe, not even Star war's universe, that's why Sci-Twi got shocked by learning that there are many universes out there.

Please, let me know if I answered your question, or if at least I understood your question in first place.

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OK, but was expecting Rainbow or (especially) Pinkie to mention something when 'Equestria' was mentioned along with 'magic' ... though ... maybe just a bit early with the comment ...

"We appreciate your concern towards our safety, but how can we trust your word being the truth about this?"

Sunset: "Applejack !" :ajbemused:

New Cortona and BLUE Team!! Can’t wait to see what kind of adventure is Chief getting himself into. I guessing it’s after Halo 6 or aka Halo Infinite. They must be hunting for Atriox and the remaining Banished forces.

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Which includes Sonic’s universe, The Legend of Spyro universe, Mario, Pokémon, Transformers, Digimon, Bakugan, Skylanders, Megaman, and other universes.

In the words of Waspinator from Transformers Beast Wars. Ooh Wazzpinator zenzez a lot of damage coming on.

"¡Ay! ¿Qué...?" exclama Rainbow Dash antes de que Chief la golpee levemente en la cara, solo lo suficientemente fuerte como para noquearla. "Uno menos, quedan 5 más". dice Cortana.

Finish Her

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Y'know, technically only Starkiller is the Sith... for the moment.

Will this story also cross over with Star Trek?

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Nope, not because I don't like Star Trek, but simply I've never been interested in it, and making a crossover with a universe I know practically nothing wouldn't be good for anyone, sorry if that disappoints you.

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Bro, I have to ask but, how did you translate my story? I'm quite curious about that.

Concerning Eclipse and Sunset, what she doesn't know is Sunset's route to now from their meeting. What Sunset did take was an opportunity from Eclipse (as they would make different decisions). It will be interesting to see when Eclipse learns about Demonic Sunset and compare to herself ...

Hoàng hôn của con người đóng tủ lạnh và trả lời. “Ừ, đôi khi quán bar nơi tôi làm việc cho tôi uống bia khi tôi hát, nhưng không phải tôi là fan cuồng của nó, thực ra, tôi hiếm khi uống bia, đó là lý do tại sao tôi giữ chúng trong tủ lạnh. " Cô nói với giọng thân thiện.

"Cảm ơn bác sĩ Ziegler, lần sau chúng ta sẽ cẩn thận hơn." Trưởng phòng nói trong khi nhìn Tiến sĩ Ziegler.

Neat premise, but crossovers really need to be confined to two verses. Any more it gets crazy and hard to follow.

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Agreed, that's why the main characters outside the EQG world are from only two universes, even I get messy writing it sometimes, but it works well using the method I said.

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She'll learn that they're not so different as she thought, and will also seek to make a new life out of what she has right now, but not everything can go so... perfectly well. After all, if Sunlight becomes finally friends with those she hurt in the past, Kylo's plan will go to waste.

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PLEASE tell me we get a translation for whatever that was...

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I already used Google Translate, and those are citations of Chapter 5, the first one is when Sunlight and Sunset first meet, and Sunlight explains why she has beer in her fridge. The second one is when Chief accepts Dr. Ziegler's recommendation to be more careful.

Here's hoping that Sunset's crystal becomes more versatile than just a lightsaber (alicorn amulet style?) ... :trollestia:

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It’s going to have many uses and abilities, but it’s common form it’ll be as a lightsaber, but it’s only matter of time

Would you Includ characters from Warhammer 40K?
like The Salamanders And Vulcan or What about The Tau Specifically commander Farsight And Maybe introducing New threads like the Ork's and The Tyranids Or maybe even Chaos Itself taking hold of Eclipse sunrise and slowly corrupting her even more.

And also will Ratchet and Clank Be in the story as well Fighting with the resistance After The events of rift Apart With their female counter parts as well?

And also could you fix the error Messages with the images?

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I'm open to the possibility, but I think Warhammer's lore is just too big, so if I wanted to include them, I'd have to spend a quite the time researching about it.

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You don't have to do research on the entire 40K lore Only research the lore of the salamanders Or The Tau Or just commander far site if you want Less' work

And have the Tau Empire As one of the resistants major allies Along with The UNSC and also The Tau Is empire have multiple alien races Under their belt there are so many of them but The other two Major species in the Tau Empire You can just research for now are The Kroot and Vespid races For now

And Salamanders Would join to save more lives and Most likely The only space marine chapter that would Fight with The resistance Against the first Order

There isn't much lore about the Tyranids Just Think of them as an endless swarm Of hungry Bugs That want to eat Everything organic That the first order Manages to direct them to attack The resistance but Back fires on them as the swarm eats up their Troops As well

And The orks They don't have much more either They just want a Good Fight So the first order recruits them On the condition that they don't attack their allies and promise them to give them a good fight Like they're making a deal with Ghazghkull And his army To help them in the fight. And they would get a good scrap out of it

And also Research the ork language And if they talk in the story I want them to talk Proper orks And how they talk

And Chaos Would just be A big Threat showing up with demons and chaos space marines To join in the fight like with the world Eaters And especially Kharn the betrayer Would make a great villain.

Then he would like he would said in His name betrayed people Like slaughtering his ally troops Like the storm troopers

And all 4 We'll see The human sumset As a valuable vessel for all four of them like hours during the heresy And how they Slowly corrupt the human Sunset And all Of them want to Mold her into the perfect vessel for them like they almost achieved it with hours So she would be juiced up with all four powers of the chaos gods And have them personally manipulate her and corrupt her soul Even more

Even though chaos is infinitely complex for now. All you need to know that chaos Is One of the bad guys in this story Might as well make them the big reveal twist villain of the whole story On how chaos corrupts the soul and The human sunset would Be a perfect vessel for then

Do research on them on the basic understanding on what They are

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Ok... those were really good suggestions, I knew a little about Warhammer 40k lore, but your summarizing makes it much easier for me to understand a few things. In fact, you've given my quite the good ideas, so now it's my turn to cook, hahahaha, thanks mate!

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I recommend that you watch the lore videos about them by Washammer and Majorkill To get more details About them

Will Ratchet & Clank Be in the story As well as their Female counter parts from rift apart?

And the dimensionator being the whole reason why they got into this Mess And Emperor Nefarious coming back To help kylo ren and star killer Fight again our heroes

And also Bring the UNSC Eternity into this story And I wanted To see it in action Destroying first order ships

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The UNSC Eternity was already in my mind for future events in the story, although Ratchet & Clank seem like a good idea, I just don't feel like fitting, but I'm not rejecting the idea.

And also if you're including Warhammer 40K In this story Like All the other factions I mentioned earlier We can Have the The war gets so out of hand that the Imperium of man has to get involved At first it's only the Salamanders Reluctantly But once the Tyranids Get involved and Ghazghkull Himself becoming a Primeork The Imperium of men See this as a colossal threat And Will reluctantly Fight with the resistance To contain the colossal threat Of them fighting the Tyrannids Ghazghkull's WAAAGH! And Chaos Itself And also The eldar We will be fighting with the resistance and the Necrons Will also reluctantly fight With the resistance against a greater threat And also Roboute Guilliman Also be a major character introduced later in this story

And like I said before Watch the detailed lore Videos About them by Majorkill and WesHammer and also PancreasNoWork

And also will Cal Kestis From jedi survivor be in this story Taking on kylo. Ren And his dark side Counterpart star killer?

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I don't know... maybe he will... maybe not

Maybe you could also put Percy jackson and his gang Fighting with the resistance after the events of trials of Apollo And then taking on Start killer Kylo and Sunrise And have them use their demigod powers to take them on I would like to see Percy facing down star killer In a duel Along with master chief.

Maybe you can also add the Dragon Born from Skyrim (Which is the main character And also have him been an argonian) As well as Alfred storm cloak Having them fighting Darth Vader in a duel. And also Ainz Ooal Gown From the Overlord anime and his Crew Also joining the fight Taking The trader Primarchs From Warhammer40k Along with His Assistant/Lover? Alberdo and the floor guardians. fighting with him

Maybe you can also add The Turtles From the Rise of the TMNT Them fighting very powerful enemies with They're mystic powers

Are you really going to add all of the crossover ideas Frostnote7434 was talking about?

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To be honest, some are good, but I simply can't, it's difficult to manage a plot with many characters and subplots, and in my personal opinion, including too much in the story will end up boring the readers in the best of cases. I'll keep a very few in consideration, though, and see if they can work out in the future plot.

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Maybe you can Have the Phantom Thieves from Prosona 5 Royal help out

And also Godzilla and Kong being along for the ride

And haveing Invincible And the gardens of the Globe helping and the villains helping the bad guys

And haveing Park employees from Regular Show fight with them as well and all the villains helping out the bad guys

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