Ever since the legendary ponies, Sunny, Hitch, Zipp, Pipp, and Izzy have brought back the magic of Equestria, it brought peace to the three tribes. Unicorns had their magic, the earth ponies had their greatest strength, and the pegasus could finally fly. All but one. Wonder Clip is the only pegasus who couldn’t fly, even if he's got back his magic like everypony else. This made Wonder lose his hopes and dreams of joining the pegasus championship race that will start in a couple of weeks! He will do anything to be up there in the sky. Anything…
Chapters (2)
This is pretty good, I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
11391684
Thank u!
11391478
Brah
11391950
You're welcome
Hope to see more of your chapters and remember: Writing as an act of commitment to your life, drawing out an inner need to express yourself.
11391970
Whoa....that's deep
11391984
It is. It's another way of saying that you're going to do great in your story.
11391989
Well thank you very much!
11391992
You're welcome
Now I'm curious as to how Scootaloo will figure into this. I'd always thought it would be cool to have her apply her mechanical skills to aeronautics, both to achieve her own dream of flight and to help other pegasi who need a little help getting airborne. Yeah, there's also Zipp's aerodynamics research, but if there's only a couple weeks before this big important race, that probably wouldn't bear fruit in time.
11392098
Believe me, there are still more plans for the future lol. But I'm glad that you're enjoying this story!