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Papa

After years of mistreatment, Cloudy Quartz has taken the first steps towards freedom. There’s a world out there filled with magical fish, traveling circuses, and dreams. She hopes to see it all, but first she must address her dying marriage, and put it out of its misery.

Beware of the following themes: Domestic violence, referenced abuse, implied incest, mild gore, and attempted suicide.

An entry in the Ancestral Tribute contest.

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DaydreamAway

DaydreamAway #1 · Oct 11th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Very deep and impactful! Though, I would add a trigger warning / spoiler for implied incest + sexual abuse.
I'm not sure if the implication was that Igneous forced himself on one of his daughters (Limestone?), so feel free to correct me if I'm off the mark with this. If this was the intended implication, it would be a good idea to add that to the triggers list.

HelloPussy

HelloPussy #2 · Oct 11th, 2022 · · ·

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Good thinking! I wasn’t sure if I got all the correct triggers so I’ll add that one now. Thanks for reading!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #3 · Oct 13th, 2022 · 1 · ·

My apologies. I only saw the question about whether this fits this morning. I don't get notifications for comments on group threads.

And I'm sorry to say that this one doesn't work. Cloudy does this at least as much for her daughters as for herself. The theme of self-actualization is there, yes, but her role as mother is inescapably intertwined with her motivation, the inciting incident, the twists and turns of the plot...

Thank you for the entry, but I'm afraid I have to disqualify it.

HelloPussy