Adult novels have always been Twilight’s guilty pleasure, especially the new ones from up-and-coming Saucy Tale. When Twilight discovers the author is the subconscious hyper-awareness of Rainbow Dash, the tales are suddenly a bit close to home.
At the top of the sky where the air is thin, a pegasus can find peace. It’s a place every pegasus should visit, but a place Rainbow knows Fluttershy has never been. A tale of adventure down a path paved with the very best of intentions...
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Nice story. Although I should warn you that one of the rules is that stories can’t be written in a script format. I suggest you edit chapter eight to be written more like a traditional story, but aside from that, this is a nice story.
How did you make the story less than a thousand words long?
I had to rewrite a chapter after I published the story.
Sisters forever!🎶
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Nice story. Although I should warn you that one of the rules is that stories can’t be written in a script format. I suggest you edit chapter eight to be written more like a traditional story, but aside from that, this is a nice story.