Twilight is given a special assignment to be a "bad filly" to see what she's missing in life. She dutifully accepts it.
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Nice job! That last bit was genius!
Edit: This line bothers me more than it should:
"We should see if you're what you're by choice."
That sounds better to me.
Twilight, your liarjack face is showing... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Lulz.
Aww, it's complete? I would have loved to see Celestia's reaction.
LOL "Peppermint"! But the codeword was Popcorn! Meaning she may or may not have wrote that at all!
"Twili? how are you going wild?"
"Very carefully"
"emergency induction port"
1307731
Me too. Fixed, thanks for letting me know.
Love the LOTR refrence
...oh dear.
That escalated quickly.
Alt ending:
When Twilight reached her home and about to put the quill to the paper when she had a revelation:
"Wait a minute. I'm about to write a lie to Princess Celestia. A Lie. To my princess. My mentor. My idol.
No. I can't. I just can't. It's just wrong!
Rainbow Dash was right. I am a goody goody four shoes. But you know, I'm fine with that. Because being bad just isn't worth it."
And with that, she wrote her real report.
Dear Princess Celestia,
I tried to do as you told me, and be a bad filly. I tried. I even asked Rainbow dash to help me with it. She tried to get me to cuss. She tried to get me to steal some cupcakes from the local bakery. She even tried to get me to drink booze and party at the local tavern! Why, I even asked some passing foals for some drugs, and now I'm probably reputed as the town narc! (whatever that means)
Still, I have learned something from this ordeal. I am a goody four shoes, and I am one by choice. I don't care what pleasures await me out there in the world for doing bad stuff; I just can't live with the guilt or consequences.
Sincerely,
Twilight Sparkle.
Popcorn
Take it or leave it.
i.qkme.me/3ozp03.jpg
Funny story
Meh could be better if there was more discription to tell me where everything was. Also there seemed to be a lack of inner dialog that could have gone REALLY nicely with the silver spoon and Diamond Tiara scene.
Didn't actually get farther than that mind you :/
But meh ok. Interesting concept. Just needs some spit polish and it'll be amazing.
twilight trying to be cool?
empresses help us.....
Oh, Twilight. Twilight, Twilight, Twilight.
Loved it.
Especially the cupcake thieving reveal, and the ending.
Still, though, where the hell would Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara get drugs?