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(oneshot)
After a very serious mental breakdown, Twilight became an outlaw. so she ran. she ran until her legs gave out. Then she hid. Then she ran again. She’s been running for five years. Her brother has been only a few steps behind her. And only one thing is undecided about this deadly game, that never seems to end, who is the cat and who is the mouse?
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Oneshot listed as Incomplete? better change that one then.
Still was interesting and intriguing, maybe make one from Shinings perspective or one from Celestia's of that day twilight snapped.
could use some work, but still very good. interesting take on twilight losing her mind
>grammar
>spelling
Fix 'em, and I'll give you a like.
Very nice, I believe you should expand this story, Im interested on the five years that she has been evading and aswell on how Shining Armor captured Twilight Sparkle in the Everfree after she evaded him.
Except for the glaringly obvious spelling errors, this is pretty good. Fix them please? This could be so much better than it is with just a little more work.
I liked it to bad its a one shot and to bad she is apperently dead anyway I hope you do more stories or do a go on of this. Wish you luck and lot of fun!
1296782 ops... Let me fix that...
Also, very interesting idea... I may just have to try them, see how they come out.
awwww come on, this has too much potential to be a one shot... MAKE MORE! i dont care if you say you just wanted it to be a one shot, there is so much more to be done....
Cats rip off the heads of mice when they catch them.
Cats are fucking metal.