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New Blood

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After a long grueling morning workout followed by a short flight, the newest cadets make the mistake of breaking formation. Their instructor promptly makes sure they'll remember not to break their bearing next time.

Just a (very) short story I wrote to go along with my art. (here)
not my usual stuff but had like 20 free minutes at work so...

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Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #1 · Jun 14th, 2022 · · ·

Nice story you got here. Short, but sweet, with a dash of good characterization thrown in. My only complaint would be about the noticeable mechanical issues throughout that, while not enough to distract, were still worthy of another round of proofreading.