Originality is the art of remembering something, but not where you got it. Ironically enough, I don't remember where I got this quote.
Life is full of all sorts of potholes. Some bigger than other, some deeper than other. Some potholes' falls hurt, other might even completely break you. Some potholes, however, can change your life.
So, what is a mare to do when she finds herself falling into one?
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Poor Carrot Top. Sometimes very good stories can be done with background ponies and this is one of them.
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Well, I am pleased to hear that you enjoyed it.
The dual interpretation of the prompt was nicely done.
Some good, minor worldbuilding too.
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tbf the actual initial prompt was actually: "pony fall into hole in comedic fashion" but I'm not much of a comedy writer so here we are. Having said that, thank you.
I hate those kind of moments. The ones where you're already having a bad day and some horrible incident with infinitesimal chance of happening actually occurs, and your left sitting there, thinking, why today, why me, what are the chances this world happen when I'm already dealing with these other problems.
Well written, really liked how you showed the psychological she's falling into and the physical one and demonstrated how it seems there's no way out without help from others for either one.
The feeling of hopelessness is palpable here, really forcing its way to forefront of her thoughts.
As the moment reaches its darkest, does the light shine ever brighter.
Bravo 👏
On a side note, I noticed a couple of errors.
Declared
Conviction
Tiring