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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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Oh, that's so sweet of you to dedicate a story to me. Nopony has ever done that for me. I know it's part of the Summer Sin exchange, but still. Thanks.

11258815
no prob, what did you think of the story?

11258843 What most impressed me about the story was its potential.

For half a decade I've been planning and scheming on making a story about changelings and a mare, but all I've been able to do is a first draft one-shot.

You, however, managed to just write it out. And there were quite a lot of ideas you incorporated into it. Each of them could possibly be a subplot in its own right. If you pursued all of them, you'd probably end up with a novel.

You navigated it and managed to get away with merely mentioning the extra ideas/motives.

For a 1000-word story, it actually holds a lot of content. Hell, you even wrote a sort of prologue.

11258863
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it, considering not many else did.

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