unmasked on the second chapter? Aight, just hope it's not gonna be an instant public appearance after this.
On a more positive note, your formatting has gotten much better, and the spelling has improved greatly. Ima put this on tracking and hope that it updates soon!

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Nah no public appearance quite yet, I'm glad to show improvement and hope you enjoy the rest of what ill have to write.

how's the next chapter coming? If it's coming i mean

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It's comming I was taking a short break to think about revising chapter one and new ideas for the stories direction. With my current work schedule it's been difficult, but regardless. Work begins today.

Hey, big fan, if you ever need ideas please feel free to DM I can get lots of ideas

This plot is remarkably well written, you really get a feel for the atmosphere. other words, it's really easy to picture in my mind, gives me a movie to watch with every passing second.

This story if pretty good so far I hope you continue it

Pleas continue this it’s really good 😀