I like guns, Resident evil, Story of the Blanks, Them's Fightin' Herds and Ruby is the best damn mare in all of Equestria. I mostly write HiE fanfiction, so come and take a peek!
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i think you did well
"This is absolutely Fantastic, I think anon stories are some of the funniest ones you can get.
(Keep up the good work)
Sincerely,
-Ya Boi Satan
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Sadly, people don't seem to like it. I guess I just don't have what it takes anymore? I mean damn, I'm off to a rough start.
11219161 Many disagree. It seems to be hated.
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well, that's kinda to be expected with troll fics and such. I had once fic that got massively hated, just because of the scenario, but i did not give up in finishing it.
Anyway, i stay with you, no matter what
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To be honest, that's par for the course for troll fics, irrespective of quality.
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I guess absurdity = trolling.
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Sorry, colloquial term. Either way, the point stands that this type of fic just gets smashed with the thumbs down no matter what, typically.
amusing
Love it. It is EXACTLY what I expected to not expect. “Mega MILF mares”
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Thx. Did you read the last chapter?
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Not yet, but I’m getting onto it
Ok first, I love it, second, wtf.
this is the best anon fic ive seen in a while. No edginess just concentrated, diluted autism. It's so strong that the government might come around to use the density here to form a blackhole. I fucking love it and am losing braincells by the second!
funny
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Thank you! Anon fics are funny. I can't get enough of them.
Hmmm. Well this is interesting.
I expected Anon to write a shit fic. Unfortunately I got quite the opposite.
A fic of exceptional quality and a captivating plot. Here are a few things that I managed to analyse from this Masterpiece.
The Mayor, known as Mare, was depicted as corrupt and utterly useless, providing social commentary on the current Government’s of the world. I also liked how the book convention was utterly disorganised and when The “Superior Princess” rushed in to help reorganise them, showing that we only need a singular body of proper management to solve all our issues.
The zipping of lips to show that words do indeed carry power and how the Nazis in the Second World War censored the press and the people that were under their occupation.
Finally, the part where Twilight couldn’t find any meaning in this fic was an excellent insight to the Nihilistic tendencies of people. Where trying to find meaning will ultimately lead to one going crazy.
I have never been so inspired in my life. I look forward to the next chapter and the spin-off, Making Mares Cum for Dummies
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I hope you like it, I mean, I hope you're loving Anon's absurd humor for what it is, just shit fic-ery.
And while I didn't plan on really making any political messages, it can also be interpreted that govt, even a singular govt body is just as inept and corrupt. It was mentioned early on that Twilight misappropriated govt funds on superfluous things like books as opposed to funding a needy orphanage. Also, Twilight made a big deal out of a very minor problem that was a simple inconvenience that could be solved by the vendors themselves.
All that money spent, that doesn't really have any value other than to keep people working endlessly and dependent upon govt.
Twilight's reaction is my favorite part, since she's commonly portrayed as obsessed with Anon. She's wanted him for a bit, then comes this conflicting message/story she can't understand. She's high on copium and wishful thinking while her instincts are telling her it's a poor quality story and nothing more. She's unable to come to terms and losses it.
Though. I'm certain canon Twilight Sparkle would just read this and go, "What is this? It's horrible! I'll talk to Anon about this later."
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Nah, mate I just pulled shit out of my arse and called it ANAL-ysis
Fic is funny as hell. Keep going
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Hey, I like your style. The turd train is on its way
"This Is absolutely screwed."
"Continue?..."
[Yes] [No]
We all know what the answer is.
Sincerely,
-Ya Boi Satan
Absolutely marvellous!
The sophistication of how language manipulated to create the most important event in Anon’s writing. The Hootenanny!
However, I knew that something was missing. It took me a while to find it. But, where be the milfs?
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Thank you! I wanted to expand more, and even considered the trees coming alive amd whopping her ass, but nixed it because I didn't like how I would have to follow it up.
I also couldn't go too balls deep since Anon can't cross the line too much. I think I did good enough though.
Milfs will come eventually. Anon has corrupted spike to the dank side.
amusing!
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Just like the Grinch, his sack grew three sizes larger. What's there to say? He leveled up.
needed a good laugh as i am sick
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Which was your favorite part?
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well, i liked everything
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Glad you liked it. My favorite was Harry the Bear farting at Fluttershy and shitting on her garden.
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of course
Well, I did not expect the fic to turn 180 that fast. Good stuff
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All I could think of was how Fluttershy enabled Angel's bad behavior by not stopping it sooner and how most animal lovers put them on a pedestal. Then Anon basically ran with that and made fun of it. Half the mane 6 are done, now I need to decide who is next. I hope the series ends on a hilarious note.
I wonder how long it will take for him to get them to those were private fictional stories and he didn't plan on anyone else reading them. He sorry if he insulted anyone but he doesn't know how they got ahold of his stories in the first place.
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You will see. It's going to be funny. All will be right at the end but misunderstandings are prime funny conflict material.
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Can't wait for the next chapter.
Was okay
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Sorry it wasn't that funny.
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No harm done, i just meant the fetish didn't bother me
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It needs a proof-reader. Several silly mistakes that throw off the immersion.
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Like what? I could use a tip so I can improve the story.
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Let's take an example paragraph.
This is what it would look like if I were writing this.
Again, this is just opinion, all I've done here is made the sentence flow a little better and corrected proper nouns and trademarks.
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Thanks for the tips! Despite my flaws, I hope the core of the story makes you laugh.
anon: problem? balcomagency.com/sites/default/files/Trollface_eurobas.jpg
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Anon: What's wrong? Why are you girls all giving me shade?
The mane 7: YOU MUST DIE!!!!!!11
Anon: Awww........*POCKET SAND!* SH-SH-SHAAAA!!
*runs away like Dale Gribble*
Following this paragraph, I can happily agree.
No anal-ysis for this chapter.
It's just left me confused.
Pretty good chapter. Now I need to get hearing aids for my eyes.
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What's confusing?
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The Degeneracy, it's left me questioning my existence.
(For extra clarity, I do enjoy this story)